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| "The Sisters of Seasons" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Where are the reviewers?
Reviewed By: Realdrawer80 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story deserves a lot more reviews than it has. I do agree with Jiyami though... A lot more booty-kicking would make this even more enjoyable and realer to the series.
| Reviewed By: Lonely_Destiny [to lazy to sign in] On: January 01, 2004 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mayn! you better update i can't stand it w/out reading its sooo good
| Reviewed By: Jiyami On: December 03, 2003 11:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read all of the chapters so far, and your story is pretty cool. You should probably include the other YYH characters more, and for it to be REAL YYH, you need more action (the violent kind). But otherwise, it's cool. P.S.:LOVED when you used 'Tallica's lyrics, it was totally kickass to do that!
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