| "Three Days of Hell" Reviews/Comments [ 72 ] |
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Reviewed By: Talia On: November 16, 2003 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo-hoo! I generally don't leave reviews because I rarely have anything helpful to say, but I really enjoyed this story and I think it would be great if you wrote a sequel dealing with how all of these various love...situations get resolved. Again, this was great (and my school work has suffered greatly because of it, lol)
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Title: Three days of Hell
Reviewed By: Vellakitty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that was good! I can't wait until you up-date next! Please keep going! This is a good fic! Poor Kag. She thinks its her falt that Inu mated with her. ITS NOT DAMN IT!! Man. Kag get it threw your thik head! Inu loves you! Anyway great fic.Please up date soon! Love it!
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Reviewed By: Relghuar On: November 16, 2003 05:09 CST
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cute story :-) Spelling could be a little better, but I can deal with that. I'm looking forward to read a sequel ;-)
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012(not signed in) On: November 15, 2003 22:28 CST
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u should make a sequal
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Reviewed By: Ishtaral On: November 15, 2003 20:45 CST
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I think it was a good story and I doubt you should feel any shame for using Kagome's heat for a story, it was a creative thing to do. Great job and can't wait to read the sequal.
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Reviewed By: Lennith On: November 15, 2003 14:12 CST
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I loved the story and I would love to see a sequal.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 21:46 CST
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ive just started the fic n i like the idea but u have a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes which makes it kind of awkward to read...
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Title: This is cool!
Reviewed By: runswithopenfists [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! This is really good, I really enjoyed it. You have to do a sequel, because you just can't leave it the way it is. It feels so left up to the imagination. I'm not very imaginitive. Please imagine for me.(If you want to that is.) If that she demoness was related to Inuyasha and Sesshy that would be so awesome. Then the whole gang would be one big family for real.Thanks all around.
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Title: lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heya! good job! LOVED it! nice pairings! Sango and Sesshomaru-never thought about that...hehe-good job newayz! As for a sequel...hmmm...i mean, it would be okay to end it here, but i think id like another like well-a sequel is qut i mena! well, i LOOOOOOVE this fic, annd i thank you Oh Great Writer! -Lani
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Reviewed By: Dork1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 19:03 CST
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your story was great! you should make a sequeal .
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 18:15 CST
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you need to put in the sequeal if you do one a part of the future shippo and myoga and see if it has changed their future
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 18:14 CST
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 18:12 CST
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yah great story need a sequeal so you can have miroku and his half breed meet agina and Sango and fluffy get together
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 18:10 CST
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it would be cool if she is like inuyasha big sister
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 18:08 CST
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thats is so coool sango and fluffy He is my fav
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