| "Three Days of Hell" Reviews/Comments [ 72 ] |
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Reviewed By: Happylama2 On: November 12, 2003 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey...makings of a good one, quite citrusy. Couple of comments though. Overdoing the question marks detracts from the story, it doesn't add. Punctuation is something that is best left traditional, I think. Also, one goes THROUGH something, not THREW something. Good overall, just needs some beta-work!
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 12:55 CST
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yah a lemon and kagome is a little perverted that is cool
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 12:55 CST
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bad wolf
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 12:54 CST
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oh poor Kagome she shouldjust let Inuyahsa mate with her adn see if that helps with her scent
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 12:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh so sad
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 12:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sounds like the making of a good story
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Reviewed By: Kagney On: November 12, 2003 12:18 CST
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You have to update and maybe have Inuyasha come after Kagome.
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Title: "Three Days of Hell"
Reviewed By: nightmagic On: November 12, 2003 02:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bad ass is all I can say. This story is good. Please update soon. Its sad though. I cryed during shippos flashback.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: LadyNight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 19:44 CST
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While i could argue a few things with you. Like Kiyomi brought up, i think this fic is cool so far! I just hope no one gets hurt by this special 'heat.'
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Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 14:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!!! goooooood job! wow-i feel sorry for Kagome, but Yash more, cause ya know, shes becoming a woman n he just cant take it! eep! n dont listen to Kiyomi, this is a BRILLIANT fic! (probaly cuz i havent had mine yet but...), so dont listen to her! i think its a her...enof rambling! good job tho! hehe-this is just soooooo funny!!! plz update sooooooon! -Lani
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Reviewed By: Kiyomi On: November 11, 2003 12:58 CST
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"heat" also known as ovulation happens once a month. A girl's period signals the end of this cycle. This is a rather degrading fanfic to women.. Shame on you.
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Reviewed By: the quiet one [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 10:51 CST
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wahoo...
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