Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 10:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope that wasn't the end of the story! This story is so well written, you are there feeling all the grief they feel. You paint a very painful and strangely beautiful picture. I can (in the spirit of a true romantic) only hope that some miricale can occure and she will be brought back to the ones she loved. I will wait for the next update (if there is one) eagerly. This is truely a wonderful story!
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