| "Nightmare" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: ferret021 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 14:54 CST
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it wasn't as dark as u said it would be....
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 09, 2005 22:29 CDT
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i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Title: I like...
Reviewed By: colorless egyptian [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 11:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is amazing. Absolutley etsquisite. It's been a long time since I've read a rape fic that I thought actually portrayed and captured the feelings and emotional torture the victom goes through, without making it seem as if the character was broken, and helpless. You didn't change the personalities so much, that they seemed...well...like I said: broken and helpless. This fic captures them perfectly. Kurama is out for revenge, wanting to destroy Karasu. And Karasu is just himself. Wishing to slaughter everyone he could. I'm not sure if that's what you were going for, but that is what I got out of this fic. You have truly changed the way I view other fics. You are an awesome writer! Please write more in the future. It would be very much appreciated!
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Title: You konw me- I'm from RC.
Reviewed By: HoshiHikara [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 08:00 CDT
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Wow. And I mean wow. you wroth that almost too well. I roleplay Shuiichi once in a while, and that part of me was frightend and angry, yet the actual me wanted to know more... Both of those parts were moths drawn to the flame though, we both wanted to see what would happen next. And that would explain alot of the anger Kurama felt durring the last match. You have a great talent, never forget that and you will go far.
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 02:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh this is MAGNIFICENT! I will simply adore this piece of fiction to the end of time! The story line is fantastic and I think this is the first time that I have EVER enjoyed a rape fic... Jeez you're amazing... Making R_Winner enjoy something of that nature is a very hard thing to accomplish. You are yet another rare writer that I give a 10 out of 10 to. Please keep up your fantastic work! Kurama/Karasu is fast becoming a favourite pairing of mine and I really would like to see more of stuff like this from you... Oh and one other thing... Bravo on the irony at the end... 'Bang!' Lol!
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Title: I think I saw this on Adult fandiction.net
Reviewed By: JJStars Yami Karasu On: February 24, 2004 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The second time I read this, and it just gets better, but why kill kurama. * cries * but overall a great oneshot.
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