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| "Anger Management Class" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] | Title: adding to my OC Cai
Reviewed By: Cursed elemental [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 22:56 CDT
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The reason she should go to MCC is because she is an extreme alchoholic. She acts just like Kuronue. And she is an extreme sugar addict. Also, she needs anger management (even if this doesn't go with her from my story Rose Winds; besides being and alchoholic.).
| Reviewed By: Cursed elemental [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have an OC! Her name's Cai (not real name). She is a supposed human, is in fact Kuronue's daughter (from my story Rose Winds). She can be a Chimera Demon that is an exact replica of Kuronue; without the hat, shorter, and a girl; with a symbol on her forehead; wearing a black t-shirt that said 'Stop Staring and I Might Even Talk To You, Let Alone Notice You', she was wearing a black skirt that reached midthigh and was cut up to the waistband, while wearing short short under it that was attached, and black n' silver VANS; or a Celestial Silver Shiori Black Crystal Angel Spirit Fox; with soft blue-colored hair with black bangs tipped in silver, then white; soft blue ears with stripes that were black, in the black was silver, then white, your right ear was tipped with black, then silver, then white; your tail had two identical stripes that were black, then silver, than white, your eyes changed color depending on your mood, your skin was almost the color white, wearing armor (a/n: like the Mythras in FFXI, but the armor part thatwas on the thighs is covering her ass and her front, down to midthigh, and the same color). The armor partthat was at her neck, had a little cystal that changed colors depending on her mood. Her Chimera Demon's name is Komouri (bat), and you can make up a name for her Celestial Silver Shiori Black Crystal Angel Spirit Fox form.
| Reviewed By: ShadowDove [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 12:50 CDT
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Kyaa! I love your fic! You have to update!! As for my character...Keimi Akiyama, incredibly bubbly and hyper with bright pink hair (think Rini from Sailor Moon), very emotional and her reason for the MCC room *thinks for a moment* she has a habit of hugging random people for no reason whatsoever and she won't let go. Hope it helps!!!
| Reviewed By: The Weirdo On: February 06, 2005 18:40 CST
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Muha. :whee: I have to go read "Stupid, Idiotic, Moronic Things that Kurama Does" now... more funny insanity! Whee! But, for the sake of keeping this story goign, my OC : Night : Dark dragon demon, controls inferno, the extreme form of fire. Sarcastic, dark-humoured and quoted as saying "I don't get angry, I get stabby." Always has a witty comeback for everything, and asks more questions then he answers. Intelligent but unexprienced, his reason for the MCC room is his irrational fear of Cornish Pixies. He'll fight off demons S-class and higher, battle armies and withstand torture, but at the mention of pixies, he jumps behind the couch with a frying pan on his head for a helmet. Black/royal blue hair, green eyes, pale (almost milk-white) skin. Ladies and gents, my OC, Night.
| Title: hey
Reviewed By: Random_buddy_number_13 On: February 05, 2005 18:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was really funny; i wanna be stuck with yusuke; heres my character: Name:Kai Tsugara Age:17 height:5'7" weight:170 eyes:red hair:jet black bday:december 1 race:hanyou(sp?) personality:a lot like yusuke;arrogant,stubborn,dumbass,random if you need anything else, email me...ty
| Reviewed By: IDefineStrange [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 18:57 CST
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You must update or face the wrath of Teletubies. *Shudder* Such... imbecilic nonsense... Drak: They're just differently abled! More like stupidly abled! >
| Reviewed By: IDefineStrange [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 18:54 CST
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THIS IS SO CREUL!!!!! Update soon!!! ...please...?
| Reviewed By: shadowdove [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 15:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kyaaa!!! I LOVE your fic!! Please, Please, Please update soon!! Kurama and Fred in the MCC room...this should be interesting! ^.^
| Reviewed By: Kitsunes Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 22:08 CST
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...-.-;; youre an idiot i want the real last chp II now!!!!
| Reviewed By: Kitsunes Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahaha loved the chappie!!!! Fred: i dont like shrunken heads............much!!! me: anyway continue the good work!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Kitsunes Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude that definatley kicked...um...::censored:: haha write more sooner please -much hate KR
| Reviewed By: dark_fire_demon19 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 10:38 CDT
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that was awesome....update very soon!!!!!!!!!! ::starts going crazy cuz there is no more:: AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Kitsunes Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are such a stupid idiot write more cause if you dont barney will soon be in your future haha lol jk pweaz write more
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