| "Bruises And Demigods" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: I like this fic ^^ ^^
Reviewed By: Chibi Enu ^_^ On: March 30, 2004 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, your fic blew me away. I mean the big words and everything (j/k) ~_^ But any ways, your fic was awsome and you rock!! So ROCK ON!!!! ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ \m/ \m/
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Reviewed By: kitsune-oni On: January 18, 2004 11:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this one shot piece, it flows really well. Wish the smut had been a bit more vivid though.. XP In a way they both seemed a little OOC, in a way it suited them perfectly. The rain thing though is a little cliche'... but I liked the description of Sanzo staring blankly at the newspaper. Overall i really liked it!
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