Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 03:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Strange story. If you were to ask my opinion, I would have to say that you should stop this story here. Like you said, you are fucked up in the head. This story, in my opinion, was a flop. But I must say that you made a good, honest attempt at it. Drop this one and try again. You do have talent, just not in this story line.
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