| "Parenting 101" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
Reviewed By: Enigma's Kitten [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 08:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story, but I have to point out an error. You argue that Jounouchi's first name is Jounouchi, but it is his last name. His sister's surname is Kawai, as she changed it when their mother reverted to her maiden name. It's written out as Jounouchi Katsuya ONLY when the others are written out at Kaiba Seto, Mutou Yuugi, Otogi Ryuuji, etc. That's the only thing that I see 'wrong' per se, but thankfully I've gotten to the point where I mentally switch it to the correct way when I read (everybody and their mother in the fandom gets this one name mixed up, seriously).
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: merika (aka Hellz_Kat) On: May 17, 2006 11:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is really funny i luv it, but in honesty it is annoying to try and read what jou is saying lol even tho i know he talks like that and im amazed that u went to the task of makeing sure his every word had his accent but i still find it annoying but hey the story itself is awsome so plez write another chapter soon i can't wait !!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: foxkit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 01:37 CDT
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*pounding fists on table* Fi-nish! Fi-sish! Fi-nish!!!! Mwahahaha this is cool...XD Pwease continue!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 00:54 CDT
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meep! please update!!! T_T i wish to read more!
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Reviewed By: Miser Meaku On: July 08, 2004 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!1 I love your story! This is my favorite pairing, and you did so well! I can't wait 'til you finish it!!!!!!!!!! ^_____^
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 02:31 CDT
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Interesting. I like the dream and the way Kaiba endured the horrible sex. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 23:52 CDT
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Interesting dream sequence and I liked Seto reminising about Mokuba as a baby and in turn singing to his "baby".
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Reviewed By: kaiba and joey lover On: March 11, 2004 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i rated this fic the way i did because u did a good job on it and i can't wait for the up date. oh and what happend to u updateing every wensday?????? well..... that's all i have to say ^_^ **** gets down on hands and knees **** please update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: mizu17 On: November 22, 2003 10:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great concept! Looking forward to read more...^_^ The sex part was good too, though poor Seto for his part...Seto's being sweet with Jou...Uhm...one question, will this be Seto's POV through out the story?
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 22:32 CST
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This is great,especially Seto's reactions to the baby.Great job on the het sex scene where Seto discovers he is gay. Looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: muin bien On: November 15, 2003 11:00 CST
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roflmao hahahaha this is goin to be a great ficcie!
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Reviewed By: alostblackcat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooohhhhhhhhhh this ic is so so so good i'm glad i't's not one of those drunk father ones please update soon
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Reviewed By: dark selene [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fic is good ;) I love it already just one lil thing: Jonouchi (I THINK that's how is spelled if not i'm sorry) is the last name and Katsuya is his name
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Reviewed By: al On: November 13, 2003 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ooo its already fun. Don't you love hate/love couples?
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Reviewed By: Blah\ On: November 13, 2003 14:28 CST
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Interesting. But you should know that 'Katsuya' is Jounouchi's FIRST name. (Making 'Jounouchi' his LAST name) I would know, since I read the Manga. All in all, very entertaining.
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Title: mmm
Reviewed By: Sweets [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 00:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol! I can so apreciate this for a good plastic chibi story. Hehehe, poor Kaiba, little does he know, Jounouchi plushies will corrupt his warped mind until he desires the puppy with a close to physical neeeeeedddd and then! then, there must be much sex. Yay!!! Please write more soon, I'm looking forward to this!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: Rainy (kelchickfrommr@hotmai.com ) On: November 12, 2003 18:05 CST
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^ _ ^ Heheh. This could be interesting. Nice job so far. Rainy
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