| "Quiet Thunderstoms" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: update!
Reviewed By: enchantress of the night On: February 14, 2004 05:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, i like your story, pls update......
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Title: I dissagree
Reviewed By: hi On: December 29, 2003 00:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dissagree with whats the face. Keep going. Your story is very good!!
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Title: haruko_haraharu
Reviewed By: haruko_haraharu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 18:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good goood but if your writing in english keep it in english and dont write japanese words it ruins it, anyway good good but make it more hentai ish like its supposed to be and write longer chapters!!! :p im not trying to be mean just giving you some good pointers anyway hurry and update..
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