| "Final Fantasy VII: Awakening" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: When
Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 16:02 CDT
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Will the series be finished? I still want to see how the clone wars turn out. Still, after all this time I'm still in suspense.
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Title: Beer, Beer beer!
Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 13:40 CST
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I love that scene! It reminds me about the time I got kicked outta the Rainbow (Gay club)! If I remember correctly, they still keep an eye for me every now and then for the little hooker incident. But I just finished the beer chapter, only like 6 more to go.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 19:59 CST
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So many friggin chapters! Dammit I WILL read the ENTIRE NIGHT if I have to! (Writer's block/boredom in effect).
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Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 18:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Yo it`s me again.I have to say,this story may be excelllent but it takes like an hour to read one chapter.As you know,since I joined MM.org i was slow in the whole typing thing.I always made short chapters,but AWAKENING was my turning point.Final Fantasy:The Ultimate Quest is my latest fic which I suggest you check out,because I have deeply improved in my skills of author......somthing.Well just contact me in some way please.
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Reviewed By: Vega Lyrah [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 07:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent, excellent. I was so throughly engrossed in this that I spent an entire day reading. Well, I made it to the last chapter, and I want more. :( I love Leira, she's badass. I'm going to attempt to e-mail you, but you never know 'round here. So, if you read this and you haven't heard from me otherwise, e-mail me at emochicknc@yahoo.com.
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Title: Why do you keep updating that same chapter?
Reviewed By: Amy (Wondering if your going to be okay!) [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 22:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sephlier, I know you're going through some difficult times and all...but chapter 6 is just fine where it is! I received like ten of your updates and some new chapters as well. You shouldn't be updating something that doesn't need to be corrected! I meant it when I said there were hardly any mistakes in your writing. Your fanfiction is perfect (compared to mine), it's okay don't worry about it. Not everything is going to be absolutely perfect and I'm hoping that everything that you're going through turns out for the better. However, stop, cease, discontinue that update on that same chapter!! Sorry, I seem pretty brutal and all...but honestly now, your chapter is fine where it is! Oh, and thank you for the wonderful pictures:-)
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Title: wow....just wow!
Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!As you know my stories are what you call....short.It took me a half-hour to read chapter 1.As you know,I`m a little kid.i know you`re like past college or something.You told me to email you which i`m not allowed to do.You can Instant message me though.My screen name is my member name.
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Chibi Sephy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 08:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! This is great! =) I haven't gotten to finish it quite yet; but thus far it's excellent. Though I'm usually not a huge fan of original characters, I didn't mind Leira too much. Take that as a compliment, Sephlier. ^-^
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Title: Not bad!
Reviewed By: Just a friend On: January 29, 2004 08:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is a wonderful story, I love the characters you made up. I've never read such a story like this one before. I seriously loved reading it! Please, update soon!
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Title: Great story!
Reviewed By: AmyAnderson45 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you portray your character Leira. She is the best female character that I have ever read. There's not that many fanfictions out there that have such a strong female character like this one. Leira is not only a great fighter but she's also intelligent. Your other characters seem quite realistic (even the new characters you made up seem real) and the way you describe them and their personalities are just so believable. I hope you'll continue writing this fanfiction. Leira's past is still yet a mystery and it will be a great experience for me to find out what actually happened to her when she was younger, of course, even though she does not recall it…it will be great either way. I like your style of writing and how you hardly make that many mistakes…I didn't even see one misspelling. You are truly talented and I must say thanks for your support.
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