| "twin sister he never knew" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: InuKagz_luver [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 15:01 CDT
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dammit update soon i like this story and i wanna know wut happens next
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Title: What's the point?
Reviewed By: Kagome_Angel2131 On: July 12, 2005 12:57 CDT
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There are a lot of things wrong with this, like for instance, this "story" is rated Nc-17 yet you say it is for children. The spelling and grammar have a lot of flaws in them. Before you write another story, you should write one out and check to make sure everything is intact before you post it here.
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Reviewed By: Ikiwi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well.. good job for at least trying! I only got through reading a few lines, but I couldn't force myself to continue.... First, I think you may have to go to school longer in order to improve your spelling skills. Your overall writing style isn't very good either.. you need to capture your audience with cliffhangers and legiable sentences! Hehe, just a few pointers. Judging your writing style, I presume you are quite young, so I suggest trying again in a few years!
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Title: Are you 5 years old?
Reviewed By: InuYashaRul3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 11:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't even read your story but I skimmed through it. Your spelling is SO horrible and I'm just being honest. Are you some little kid that is trying to write an entertaining story? NOT!!! Don't write in this site if you don't know how. GOD....PEOPLE these days....
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Title: It blows
Reviewed By: It's horrible On: January 13, 2004 23:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it sucks. I hate it. It makes me feel annoyed and bored. And the spelling is so horrible I had to sit and decipher a paragraph (which is all I read by the way) just figured you should know you SUCK! DON'T WRITE ON THIS SITE IF YOU SUCK! -Gage-
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Title: yea? well spell this
Reviewed By: gohans_girl_ashia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 22:36 CST
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biotch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yea and i mean biotch too, ya lil fukk
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Reviewed By: Frozen Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 10:41 CST
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You need to work on your spelling- a LOT. I couldn't even read this story because of it... And your writing style needs a massive amount of improvement.
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