| "The Love Triangle" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Writer for Hire, the genius On: April 19, 2004 21:34 CDT
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You're a wonderful writer... in the sense that it's a wonder you know how to use a fucking keyboard. Look, although *I* know full well that it's best to waste time insulting someone who's superior to you in every way, you apparently need to be told. But I won't bother to tell you, because frankly sweetie, I -enjoy- your pathetic little attempts at consoling your stupid friend who's balling like a baby over the exposure of her pathetic story for the piece of crap that it is. It amuses me, you know? It's kind of cute, almost, in a sickeningly stupid way.
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Title: Zero88
Reviewed By: Zero88 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 09:23 CST
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Yeah, I know it's pathetic to review my own fic. But I have to point out something to people. This is a shounen-ai fanfic. So if you're looking for a Squall and Rinoa lemon scene....I'l think about it.
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Title: that was good
Reviewed By: AnimeALLday [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 12:48 CST
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hi i just wanted to tell you that forget about what achoo is saying cause my stories are short and I get reviews. That was very good though,although I would have liked a squall and Rinoa lemon.
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Reviewed By: Ah-Choo On: November 15, 2003 10:39 CST
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Listen, no offence but your story doesn't cut for a review. If you really want people to say "WOW!" you gotta write more to the plot. That way, people will see how you really write. Just looking at the second chapter makes it look like a pamphlet, it's that short. You need to add more to your chapters next time and some more detail. If you do this, you'll at least get SOME reviews. Sorry to be harsh but good luck on your next chapter.
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