| "This Time" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: yoshine On: November 22, 2003 08:52 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
write another chapter the story is very good you have a lot of originlity
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Reviewed By: Dawn Illusion On: November 18, 2003 11:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Your story is really good, please keep writing. What you said is true, there aren't enough Goku/Chichi fan fics out there so please don't stop writing yours, it's really good and I can't wait to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: ChiChiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 09:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Litlle confusing, but keep writing!! I love this story's beginning!! Keep Going!!!! Or else...
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