| "Stronger Than Yesterday" Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Reviewed By: kage kitsune On: April 14, 2004 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEZZZZZ update this fic real soon!! Is sesshy or Shippou, or Inu or Kikyo, or even Naraku gonna show up? Maybe a demon Sango and Miroku could show up!
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Reviewed By: BRL On: April 14, 2004 20:06 CDT
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*breathes out* Whoo, boy. Okay. I really like this story, right. But, you are writing Kagome WAY out of character. She would never wear the clothing you are putting in, unless she was: 1.high 2.drunk 3.not Kagome or 4.a combination of these 3. She is acting way to raunchy for her character type--she can be silly and funny and at times stupid, but you are writing her as a space cadet. (someone who zones out then comes back to "tune in" as if nothing happened) and she is not. The scene with the lengerie, for example, was a perfect "Kagome Reaction". The song "left right, left right", however cute, was not really necessary. You are the author, however, and I can not rightly criticize you for things that I think you've done wrong. This is JUST my opinion, and I am asking you as your reader to please consider, for future references, changing the way you write Kagome. Thank you for your time. ~~~~~~Black Rose Lady~~~~~~~~~~
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: April 14, 2004 18:21 CDT
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Ahhhhhh! *hides* Too...Much...Kagome...Bashing! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! No more bashing, unless its Kuwabaka! please, dont bash her anymore!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon! I want to know what happens next! And can you please make this a kag/hiei fic?
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Title: Hahahahaha
Reviewed By: Kaiyo Azalea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Man That Chapter was great I couldn't stop laughing! Ohhhhh, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Nya!! :3 ^-.-^/
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Reviewed By: Shadow Elementalist Kitsune On: March 31, 2004 06:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow its good keep it up I love the story line by the way
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Reviewed By: inuyuyurrk [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 03:31 CST
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I think Hiei is awesome!!! I luv the story so far...PLZZ update soon!!!
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Title: good stuff
Reviewed By: antisocial mint [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is great i love how you write! i try writing like this but its not exactly good :) -mint
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Reviewed By: FrbddnAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when are you going to update? this is excellent. please update soon this is great!!!
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: Lady Death On: February 27, 2004 23:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE HIEI TOO!! Who doesn't?!?I love the way you write your story! OH!! IS it a kagome Hiei pairing or not!? Lady Death
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Reviewed By: Vic_18 On: February 18, 2004 18:18 CST
Comment/Review:
This is great, please keep going. :)
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Reviewed By: becca a.k.a. cow tipper On: February 14, 2004 13:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After a few streches in the yard, Kagome began her daily jog, ponytail flopping behind her like a...something that flops. lol that was funny! i really like ur story so u better finish soon! will u pair kagome and hiei together? ^_^ p.s. dont ask about the name.lol long story
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Reviewed By: FrbddnAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really really like this, cant wait till you update. is there gonna be pairings for this fic? if so whut r they?
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: January 10, 2004 09:49 CST
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OH MAN!!! i really need u 2 update!!! this is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cool! i vote for Kur/Kag! pllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllease update!! do it or ill cry! ^^
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Reviewed By: ~Purple~Fox~ On: January 03, 2004 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HELLO I LOVED IT I LOVED IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please Update soon!!!!*-*
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