| "Neo Digimon: Digital War" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Title: continue
Reviewed By: Aarik rage On: December 06, 2006 15:55 CST
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please continue its getting interesting and if the kaizer does ANYTHING to veemon and wormmon i will rip the flesh from his bones i will rip him apart limb by limb bone by bone and tenden by tenden and burn the remains.
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Reviewed By: Fruitloop Trooper [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 19:14 CDT
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I'm glad to see that you're still writing. I'm going to guess that in order to pass Piccolomon's training Taichi's going to have to accept himself as their leader, correct?
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Reviewed By: thevisitorblack On: September 20, 2004 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. I assume that Daisuke is not dead, simply because you said Seemingly dead. Even though this was a transitional chapter with little action, It was fitting beacuse the readers needed time to mourn Daisuke and come to grips whith what has happened. I did find the transitions a bit abrupt though, at least in terms of the Piccolomon scene.
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Reviewed By: FruitloopTrooper On: September 18, 2004 18:12 CDT
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I hope Taichi accepts his role as leader soon, they really need him now.
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Title: Coupling
Reviewed By: Izumi Ryu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 10:19 CDT
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Minor note to Surgedragonzerox...Archive doesn't really allign to a certain relationship. He only writes what's viable through canon (whether it be Daikari or Takari or whatever). In other words, he doesn't try to appeal to specific fanboys/fangirls. Whether you like the pairings our not, you have to admit that he's pretty good at this.
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: surgedragonzerox On: December 26, 2003 17:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
due this fic is the grearest i couldn't find a misake in your fic!, anyway even through Davis died (he's my fav char) this chap is still cool! but are you a daikari fan or not tell me. oh if your takari then well bye. great fic!
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Title: MORE!
Reviewed By: The Legend of Me [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! As always, Lord Archive continues to create the best fanfics ever. The alternate universe take he does a lot really works, and while I don't like the idea of Chosen dying, this is great! (Maybe just International Chosen are gonna die permanatly).
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Reviewed By: Nate Grey [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Spectacular. Only one writer has ever impressed me with every story, and you're the second. Your knowledge & grasp of the Digital World is overwhelming at times, but thankfully I'm experienced at tracking down elusive Digimon. I thought you'd blown my mind with Red Digivice Diaries, but now you've managed to re-write 01 & 02...AT THE SAME TIME!!! Now, that is somethng to be proud of.
The dislike between Taichi & Kou is a suprising but compelling element, and I've never seen Mimi's refusal to fight so strong before. It's really amazing how far this group has gotten, when you consider that Devimon, Vamdemon, the Digimon Kaiser, and the Dark Masters are all present at once. I was hoping the REAL Ryo would've shown up by now, I always like your take on him. You are without a doubt THE best Digimon author I've had the honor of coming across, so PLEASE keep up the incredible work. You are truly an inspiration... *bows* |
Reviewed By: Wandering Tamer On: August 13, 2003 23:17 CDT
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I've already rated you so... i wont bother this time, it hasn't changed.
How could you do that to Daisuke? So now he's like Ryo? Um, one other thing, do humans get reborn like Patamon was?
Yeesh, now you've left no alternative except to have it Takari. Mutters under breath. I may not like some of the things you have done but they are a change of pace from the usual fic so i read them anyhow. Keep it up. This thing has kinda grown on me.
(Prays for the digimental of miracles to do it's job and create a miracle) |
Reviewed By: Gray On: August 09, 2003 18:57 CDT
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For "The Sea of Sand" you seem to have forgotten Miyako when it came time for the girls to make a run for it. |
Reviewed By: Imerak On: July 24, 2003 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool fic! Between R or NC-17, I'd say R. |
Reviewed By: Wandering Tamer On: April 09, 2003 15:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Intriguing. While I like the story and enjoy the change in the characters, I find it disturbing that it may not turn out that Taichi and Yamato are the strongest. Also, I was wondering whether the Angel Digimon still have the strength against darkness in this story. This came to my attention because in Adventures, Angemon is clearly seen to be on par with Vamdemon as an Adult and powerful enough to destroy a Ultimate (Piemon) as a Perfection.
Also, when are Jyuo and Iori going to show up?
Ah, so many questions and so little writing space without being annoying. Still, original and twisted in an artistic way. |
Reviewed By: Alan Wilkinson On: April 05, 2003 07:19 CST
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*Glares at Chibi-Ayashi* Chibi-Daisuke will have revenge!
Anyway, great chapter, if short. |
Reviewed By: Canis Black [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 15:18 CST
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Wicked! Go chibi-Ayashi!
Well, I liked this final form a lot better than the pre-reader draft I got from you earlier. Plus the Chibi-Izumi asks was also nice as well. I'm eagerly anticipating the next chapter of whatever you decide to work on next.
Canis Black
as always
"Beware the rabid black mutt puppies." |
Reviewed By: Tri-Stater On: June 24, 2002 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Good! So you've decided to use File Island as a transport hub, eh? Now, the Kaiser puzzles me. The Dark Spores (orginally)were released by Millenniumon after being defeated by Ken and Ryo. But, this can't be the case here, as Millie was formed as a result of a Jogress between the remains of the Mugendramon(who's still around in this fic) and a Kimerimon.(Which makes the Kaiser's prize(Ryo)a cypher.) Also, Ken was set on that path by Owikawa(who also created Archemon and Mummymon), who was possessed by the spirit of Vamdemon(again, that can't be the case here). All this makes me wonder what you've got cooked up in this fic. You're planning something! |
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