Reviewed By: YuYuHakushoismyLIFE On: August 20, 2005 02:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a different and very original take on a Ban/Ginji story. I liked how it leaned a lot towards Ban's feelings and gave them a genuine feel. I really enjoyed it, but at times you used the wrong tense or mispelled a word. Over all however it is really to put it "Print worthy" ^_^
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