| "Remembering How I held You..." Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Ya know...
Reviewed By: redfluffydice05 (not logged in) On: July 28, 2005 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya know what this story and the other one (Chibi Saga...I loved You First) make me wanna say/do???? *clasps hands together at heart and and cooes....* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !............................................. redfluffydice05
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Title: Love your story
Reviewed By: Valerie*inu lover On: October 28, 2004 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG...I love your story! It's so good, even though it barely had any hentai material. It was adorable, sweet, and just so romantic! I'm a sucker for stories like that!!! Also, the way you made Inuyasha two beautiful stories; Inuyasha in his childhood is just so adorable(As strange as it may sound I liked this story better not that there was anything wrong with the other one, but it was just the simple fact that you made them look so perfect for each other) *I know kind of weird and scary for a chick that LOVES sappy love stories* but now you know just how much I truly loathe the lil fesces....(gasp) You know you made me realize something that will change a lot of people's rightful names for Kikyo NEVER SHALL I CALL KIKYO BITCH AGAIN FOR IT MEANS FEMALE DOG AND THAT WOULD MEAN INUYASHA'S FEMALE DOG OR SESSHOUMARU AND THAT IS NOT RIGHT AT ALL! Well, I won't bother you anymore, wow I wrote a lot; got a lil carried away with myself here. Back to subject: And Inuyasha's present with Kagome and how cute and pure you made their physical confession of love for each other be... their mating was just beautiful! To wrap it all up beautiful story!
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Reviewed By: Lady Fang On: December 19, 2003 14:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Very cute. I love it.
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Reviewed By: Gothic Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooo...I liked it so much...why did it have to end? *starts balling* Oh well, it was wonderful while it lasted! :)
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Reviewed By: Crest Starlight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! SO CUTE!! Funny enough the episode of Inu Yasah where you get to see him as a small boy with his mom, was playing in the background as I read this. Ironic isn't it? This inspired me for 2 fan fics of my own manly one in the future. It was so cute and sweet I really just can't get the image of lil inu and lil kagome cuddling. Great job once again!
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Reviewed By: SayaoranInuyasha11 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was awsome.... that was so nice.... my older sister almost cried..... ^__^; hehehe ps. just indicate where the flashbAcks were anything else VERY NICE!!! keep up....
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Reviewed By: firelily14 On: November 16, 2003 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story. I've never read anything w/this type of plot before. You handled it well. Only criticism is that you might want to somehow signal the flashbacks w/asterisks or something.
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Title: You owe me a box of tissue
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 01:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god, the whole story was so sweet, I don't know how many times I cried. I'm turning into such a softy. man oh man your good. I'm putting you on my favorite author list right now
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