| "This Side of Materialistic Heaven" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Yue IX On: December 08, 2003 19:57 CST
Comment/Review:
hmmm, nice fic. I thoght the plot was a bit hasty in teh begining but it kinda falls in place well. I'm still a bit puzzled as why you choose to make Tastumi attacked by -bears- (how shamefull @___@) but I forgave you quiete fast since it leads to Muraki x Tastumi goodness ^0^ so please write more soon.
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Reviewed By: Brandi the fish On: November 26, 2003 17:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, let me say that this is a wonderfully well written peice. I have no qualms at all with it and find it extremely interesting and completely enthralling. The only thing I want to point out is, toward the middle of the peice, the conjugation of the words got a little confusing. Like one example, you used "he's" instead of "he was". Other than that, I throughly enjoyed this peice and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. ~Toodles~
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Reviewed By: Hatsuharu On: November 20, 2003 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I already reviewed the 1st chapter on fanfiction.net (I'm Lockie), now I found a new one here! Tee-hee! Thank you so much for giving us such a wonderful fanfic! Please continue, you're doing a great job ^.^
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Reviewed By: Lothlorien [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 14:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Amaaaaazing! Looks really interesting, can't wait for more!! If this turns into a Muraki/Tatsumi fic, I'll love you forever!!
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