| "Everything I've Ever Wanted" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: DeepBlue1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 17:22 CST
Comment/Review:
You need to work more on your grammer and spelling. There was a few errors but not to many. still very good.
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Title: +(Laughed so hard she succesfully coughed up her pancreas)+
Reviewed By: CrimsonShinigami-16 On: December 12, 2004 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bwa ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!! (Is evil,ne?) I love this! If you dont write more, I will get Duo to make you swallow his braid while my per dragons torment you lustfully! Huh? Lustfully? Damn, you made me hot with all the Yami/Seto stuff! (Picks up a flamethrower from the first chapter, about to turn it on you when...) "Melissa, youll hurt yourself" cries the ever watchfull Quatre. "And then you cant watch me and Trowa do the Bingbangshooulah!" "Bingbangshoolah?" I enquirely evilly. "In other words you mean hard, slow, wet lubricated..." "MELISSA!!!"
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Reviewed By: Kittylyn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2003 00:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Mayo... *snickers* *starts laughing uncontrolably* Kat(my darker half): Aibou, WHAT have you been smoking? Nuffink... *giggles* Kat: Right... Good fic, update soon. Please. *starts running around her bedroom on a sugar high* Kat: What she said. Now, where is that handy little stun gun... *wanders off to look for said stun gun*
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Reviewed By: Yuki mouto 8X10 On: November 17, 2003 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the love fo Ra PLEASE UPDATE don't and I'll cry.
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Reviewed By: Pyrokitsune On: November 16, 2003 10:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I'm the first to review. PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE UUUPPPDDDAAATTTEEE. I love this couple and I love stories so I wan to see what happens. Keep up the good work ;)
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