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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Slywolf On: December 02, 2003 00:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eee!!! GOOD JOB!!! A wonderful story/sequel! I LOVED the ending! It made my heart slench with happiness! Sooo good! I'm glad the twins killed Naraku! So sad that Kagura had to die though...*sniff* I hope Kanna died as well! How can someone be so....obedient?! Gah! Well, anyways hun, good story! Sooo glad ya made a sequel and I wish you luck on your next story!!! Lotsa Love-Lani
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: December 01, 2003 23:53 CST
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This was great! Are you going to continue this in any way? Like after the three years is up and Kagome and Inuyasha return, they visit her mother and introduce their son to his grandmother. It is just as thought.
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Reviewed By: firedemon86(not signed in) On: December 01, 2003 23:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very VERY GOOD clap clap your are a great writer and I'm kinda sad seeing this story end but thanks so much for a great story. And PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!
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Reviewed By: Julie K [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWW!!! That was a fabulous ending!!! I just loved it, even if I do need to go brush my teeth due to all the sugar, but I wouldn't have it any other way!! You did wrap things up nicely, even tieing back into the 1st story. The original characters were very good, I really enjoyed the addition of Kyoto and the twins. You especially made Kyoto fit in so well to the story. I also like how you have Sesshoumaru and Sango interacting. You should do a little side story for just the two of them, perhaps how they manage to work everything out. I think that has a lot of potential. Could have lots of angst and lemons in it. Anyway, I hope to hear more from you. Please write some more stories.
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Reviewed By: scarn16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 21:14 CST
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finally over and well done if i may say so. i never got a chance to review because before i could a new chapter had come out and now that it's over i have to say that throughout the story you kept me interested, and did a very good job building up their characters and relationships. i had feared you would never resolve the problems with Sango and Sesshoumaru, but you did and tied the ending together very nicely.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: sesshou_lover On: December 01, 2003 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was beautifull, the end made me cry .... it was soooo sweet. great story.......!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Scottishfae [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following this fic since you started it but never reviewed. I really like how it turned out! This was a really good fic and I enjoyed thorougly! Is there a possibility for a sequel or are you going to end it here? Either way I would like to congratulate you on an excellent fic!!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: December 01, 2003 16:53 CST
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Interesting pair of chapters, I do hope that they will be able to save Kali in time but I have a feeling that it will all turn out ok ^_^ Nice work and I as ever look forwards to seeing the next one, Hououza
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Title: Hououza
Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 08:40 CST
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You know after I read Three Days of Hell I was just tinking to myself 'I really want to find out what happens, I hope there is a sequel' then low and behold I find this the next day. I really enjoyed the story so far and look forwards to seeing more in the future. Best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: November 27, 2003 03:48 CST
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Will they succeed in finding her? Will they finally defeat Naraku? Please update as soon as possible.
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 20:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH! i FINALLY caught up! *cheers herself* YAY! GOOD chpaters! ugh! You've been updating sooo much that i had a HARD time keeping up hun! @-@X sooo many chapters to read, sooo little time! lol-but good chapters! poor Kagura! eee! i feel sad at Kagura's death...*sniff* but, what be done must me done! good job hun! i hope you update when ya got the time and i hope you get better sooooooon! *hugs you* plz feel better okay! -Lani
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Reviewed By: Um On: November 26, 2003 00:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay. Keep posting like that. Yeah... Um Lots and lots of Chappies.
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: November 25, 2003 22:54 CST
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What will happen next? Will their plan work? Will they save Kouga's pups? What about Kagura? Update as soon as possible.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru_Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, i just read all those chapters in one sitting. LOL ^_^. Now all i wish was that there was more. I never in my life thought i would feel sorry for Kagura. But now I do. POOR THING. Ok, update soon, OR I WILL GO INSANE!
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Reviewed By: mandie On: November 25, 2003 16:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waz up i love your story plz update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzz thanks and Ja Ne ^_^
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