| "Sparring session" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Irish Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 11:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was funny. please write more
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Reviewed By: VickiLe On: August 06, 2005 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"And the favor I wanted to ask? I was going to ask him to clean my room and do the laundry, the dorm's cleaning lady is sick." *Giggles* I would have never ever thought that Naruto would give himself to Sasuke. I like how you describe everything, the smells, it makes it more realistic. I really enjoyed reading it, though it took me a bit to realise that exiting was exciting.
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Title: Naru/Sasu Lover #?
Reviewed By: melody [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! ^___~ Very cute idea, and quite well done. Oh, and I loved the ending, lol. (But it does make you wonder just who else Naruto has been with, ne?) ^^ Keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: Sivy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 08:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I really liked how that was done, barely any OOCness.. which happens in a lot of SasNaru fics, and you didn't make them steryotypical, very nicely done... Good job!
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Reviewed By: ice-lolli333 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really nice! I like the way it was written. that the end? just not sire. it was a good ending, tho, if it is.
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