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Reviewed By: Dyna Dee On: February 07, 2004 01:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best stories I've read in a while. I love Duo's P.O.V. and the way you unfold the story. I found this by accident because mediaminer's updates don't come up right. It's a real run around for me to find current updates for some reason. I hope I can find your story again and finish reading this excellent fic.
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Reviewed By: Turtle_Fire On: February 02, 2004 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your talent is just amazing, I am shaking with anticipation of seeing the next chapter. The new Heero seems so fine, I wonder whether he would remain a smooth talker in front of Duo. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Devina On: February 02, 2004 16:46 CST
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so he has finally seen Heero ne? sick b@stard..*grmbl...spit* anyway i liked the chap and i really hope u update soon cuz its just SO GOOD! KILL THE OZIES! wasnt me *whistle*
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Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 15:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh!! Wonderful chapter!! I really love the voice you've given Duo, the tone of his "narration" for lack of a better word, is very authentic, I think! I love his fixation on the Perfect ass. ~snerk~ I also like how Duo hasn't been pining away for Heero all these years, in love with him from afar, and all that hooey. He admits a good, healthy lust for the guy (as if anyone in their right mind WOULDN'T have a good, healthy lust for Heero!! ~swoons~), but isn't all emotional and sappy about seeing him again. I can't wait to see their first meeting!! ~bounces~
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Reviewed By: Glitch On: February 02, 2004 10:36 CST
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Wow, I really feel for poor Duo... Heero had better come up with a damn good excuse for the way he turned out. Good story.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 21:56 CST
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Oh crap - I was hoping it would have been Heero at the door! :( Oh well; it gave Treize a chance to catch us up on why Hee-chan is there (at least in his prim and proper mind.) I'm with everyone else - please let them finally meet in the next chapter! I can't stand the thought of him on OZ' side; I'm hoping it's all one big ruse and Heero's going to actually recruit Quatre and Duo and they'll take OZ down from the inside! Cool huh? :) Oh well... You keep writing them like you want, Xe. They're the best!
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Reviewed By: SweetAlexial On: January 28, 2004 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please, Oh please for the love of all....update as soon as you can!!!! I love this fanfiction!!! It is so totally great and very interesting!!! Please bring heero in the next chapter...I am dieing to see duo and heero confront one another!!! I love your writing...keep up the good work!!! Love, SweetAlexial~Brandy ^.^
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Reviewed By: LadyRaja On: January 28, 2004 02:35 CST
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This was good and i'm glad that you haven't abandoned this fic, although it would be REALLY nice if you updated ALOT sooner next time!!! I can't wait to find out what happens next and i really REALLY want Duo to show all those Ozzie bastards up. Do something that they CAN'T follow on camera and get them a little nervous. Anyways, good job and i egerly await the next chapter!!! :)
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Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh! I love the way this is progressing! I can't WAIT for Heero to grace the scene, so we can see what the real story is on why he defected to the enemy camp! I'm VERY anxious to see how he's going to sway Duo over to HIS side, too! I love the cynical Quatre!! SO nice to read him not written as the wide-eyed innocent! I'm really hoping that you'll throw a little 6x4 into the mix, Q-ball does seem to be rather fixated on his boss, doesn't he?
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Reviewed By: Turtle_fire On: January 27, 2004 02:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Deep joy! Another GREAT chapter. I love the fact that Duo still had the guts to talk nasty to Treizie, he totally deserved it. And please bring Heero out in the next chapter, I would love to see what Duo would do to him. THANK YOU!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: RaceUlson@aol.com On: January 27, 2004 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this, the whole idea is sexy without being crude and engaging without being too "out there". I am dying to know what the deal is... and if the benefactor *is* who Duo thinks it is... what took so long? That mirror across from the bed worries me, too. I love Duo's voice, especially the scene with Treize. I love the New Improved Quatre. I love the plot- which has totally captivated my mind, now. Please please please up date sooooooon.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 26, 2004 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Oh! Wow! I suspected that Heero might be the one, but geesh, with all those stunts he pulled I'm wondering Why? Your writing style is so great that I can't help but hate Heero for the actions he took, which eventually left Duo feeling utterly and completely helpless. I can't wait to read more of this fic and see how it progresses. Update soon and keep up the GREAT job.
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Reviewed By: Devina On: January 26, 2004 12:13 CST
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updat soon i loved it! ^_~ u got urself a new fan!
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Reviewed By: yuikey On: January 03, 2004 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor duo! please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!(^_-)
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Reviewed By: vinnea On: January 02, 2004 19:07 CST
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*starts hypnotyzing* you will write more...you will hurry...you will write more right now...you will post soon.... :) I really enjoyed that one, please keep up the good work!
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