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Reviewed By: Hououza On: February 10, 2004 17:40 CST
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Progressing very nicely! Really enjoyed that chapter even if Sesshi himself wasn't in it. Story keeps getting better, wonder how the lord will react... Looking forwards to the next chapter! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: chapter 3
Reviewed By: jschu25(nli) On: February 09, 2004 20:54 CST
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Great job on this chapter, there was only one or two spelling errors that I detected. One was when Morgan was trying to place Rin and her clothes "revealed" her status. And I can't think of the other one. The details are great in this story.I was wondering if you were plan on going into more details about the sister Briana? If not would you consider a side story about her. It just sounds so interesting. Be back for more...~_~ jschu25
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Reviewed By: Julie B. On: February 09, 2004 14:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What will happen next? What will Sesshomaru do?
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Title: first of first
Reviewed By: darkice2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 12:06 CST
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this story is starting to develope into something that i have come to enjoy and look forward to please continue with this one thanx for being a ffwriter ^_^
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Reviewed By: Runishie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 13:53 CST
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Loved your other story Love this one Hurry and update I know you just updated but i can't wait to read more I love this story it's good and Morgan is quite a pistol Rin is sooo adorable
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Reviewed By: Relix On: February 04, 2004 11:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice you updated, take your time on making this, i would hate to see this becoming a failed one.. courtship was exellent and aniversary was good, i hope this will be good as well. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: jschu25(nli) On: February 02, 2004 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hi, I'm glad to see you update this story. There were a few spelling and grammar errors. The only one that I really noticed was the last sentence of your AN, Rin is bored. Take your time, again good job...jschu25
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: February 02, 2004 17:47 CST
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First of all that was an excellent chapter. Second of all don't worry about the updates, no-one can expect you to put your life on hold for this. I for one am happy to wait if only to enjoy the pleasure of reading such a work. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: fireash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh i am very interested in this. i like it so far. i hope you update soon. that was a little gross about the afterbirth though. anyway hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: inufangirl On: January 06, 2004 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love ur story, hope u update soon!
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Reviewed By: stephino On: January 04, 2004 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its about time you updated...
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 03, 2004 21:19 CST
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Interesting story, certainly an unexpected idea but one that promises to be great from what I have read so far! Looking forwards to the next chapter! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: jschu25(mm too stupid to let me log in) On: January 03, 2004 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, This is the start of a great story. I think i'll like the demons from Ireland and maybe hope that Morgan and Sesshoumaru will get together. I noticed only a couple of spelling errors nothing major. I did have a question about Kaori. Is Kaori a unisex name in Japanese? I only ask because one of my coworkers and friend has the same name and is female. And the eating of the afterbirth was REALLY, REALLY gross. Anyway, I look forward to reading much more. jschu25
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Title: Yeah
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story i really want to know wats gunna happen plaze update soon
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: January 03, 2004 04:38 CST
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What will happen when Sesshomaru meets the wolves? What about Kagome and Inuyasha's son? Please update as soon as possible.
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