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Reviewed By: BladesoftheValkyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Whoa, what happened to the quotation marks? Reading this chapter was really confusing :-\ Also, when someone is not entertained, they are "bored." When you spell the word b-o-a-r-d, it can refer to a plank or boarding something (such as a ship). Just FYI ^_^ Other than that, I'm really enjoying this story :) Great work!
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Reviewed By: Angel of the Opera [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 15:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy that the new chapter is up. It's kinda depressing that there's only one chapter left in this fanfic. T_T Anyway, this is the first time I've reviewed & rated any of your stories, butI've read all three. All of them are AMAZING. You keep everyone in character, which I greatly appreciate. Morgan amuses me to no extent. This chapter was very good. ^_^ However, the only thing you could improve is spelling. If you need a beta reader to check for spelling or grammar mistakes I'd gladly do that. O.o That was a long review. -->KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK AND HOPE EVERYTHING WORKS OUT FOR YOU
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 21:16 CST
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I just wanted to say that I'm so happy that you updated! I'll have to go back and read a few of the last chapters to remember what's going on because it's been so long though. When I read the new chapter you can expect another review!
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 05:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After a long dry spell, that chapter was well worth the wait. Keep up the good work.
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: kornychic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa what a hot chapter! im so glad you were able to update, because I really enjoy your stories (Ive read all three!). I love how you keep sesshomaru in character so he doesnt go all feminine on us lol. Morgan is so original and very interesting. Love the chap, love the story, update when you can,and i cant wait! CHEERS
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 17:52 CDT
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Magnificent chapter. So, Sesshomaru has found his mate, now all he has to do is explain it to her family...and perhaps his. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 09:29 CDT
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I'm glad to hear that you haven't forgotten about this story and will be finishing it! I hope evrything works out for you and wish you luck!
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Title: Where are you?
Reviewed By: ~*~Meems On: October 01, 2005 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's not over, is it? We've been waiting for awhile...it's very good! Please update?
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 04:06 CDT
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It's really been a while. Are you planning on continuing this story?
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Title: Arg
Reviewed By: Mysts On: August 12, 2005 02:21 CDT
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UPDATE!!!!!! or i shall sic the all mighty, all powerful Tick on you.
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Reviewed By: Jaken-sama On: August 03, 2005 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great, but you need to work on grammar and spellings. Also, you need to make sure you place the right pronouns in the right spots, I've noticed that you mix up he and she quite often. Other than some basic gramatical errors your writing is enjoyable to read ,and it has a great artistic flare. I hope you keep writing at such a high level.
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Reviewed By: DarkDemonHuntress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 12:01 CDT
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oops... i just read the status on the fanfic and it says Complete... no! u can't be complete *sniffle* well it was a fantastic story but i hope it really isn't done.
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Reviewed By: DarkDemonHuntress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 11:58 CDT
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UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! for the love of BOB, update! pleeeeeeeeeeezzzzz! *puppy dog eyes*
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Reviewed By: DarkDemonHuntress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 12:38 CDT
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UPDATE PLEASE! **puppy dog eyes**
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Reviewed By: DarkDemonHuntress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 21:33 CDT
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update!!!! love this story!! it's addictive!
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