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Title: Worthy
Reviewed By: SpitFYER20 On: November 15, 2004 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your story today and I spent almost an hour pouring over it. I absolutly loved it! I found it hilarious! I really liked the fact that you made Rin grow up! Even though I'm not too fond of the whole Inuyasha and Kagome pairings. I love the whole Morgan character. She really spices things up for Fluffy. Please keep up the good work and please update soon. I really want to read more in the near future. Until then Good job and please update......is tomorrow too soon? lol
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: Runishie (not signed in ) On: November 15, 2004 11:30 CST
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YAY! Your great at updating I really liked this chapter I'm falling inlove more and more with morgan as the story progresses. ^_^ Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: November 14, 2004 16:51 CST
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Excellent chapter once again. I love how this is progressing, the way you are playing out the tensions between the two of them. I think Sesshomaru is really going to need to let the mask slip quite a bit more for Morgan to feel comfortable...the thing is how will he cope I wonder. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
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I really enjoy your writing. You're in my favorites list. This wasn't a bad chapter; the characters were moved to the new scene and more cast was introduced. However, the spelling was really, really bad.Examples: "Morgan aloud it" == allowed "He seemed bord." == bored "servents" == servants "definitly" == definitely Those are from just the first two paragraphs.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 14, 2004 18:39 CDT
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Beautiful chapter as always. DOn't worry about the gap between chapters, from what you said you are...about as busy as someone can possibly get without falling over from exhaustion. I hope everything goes well, good luck with college. I do look forwards to the next chapter when you have chance but don't hurry on my or anyone else's account. I will still be here and I would hope so will everyone else. My apologies for rambling. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Thornwitch On: October 14, 2004 14:50 CDT
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I like this story, but for christ's sake, use the spellchecker on you computer! That, and there are a lot of innapropriately homonyms in this story. For instance, you keep spelling "hide" as "hyde" its super annoying.
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Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 21:13 CDT
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i review again please i love this story and i would like to know wat will happen...please update soon thank you...ja ne
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Reviewed By: Horse_Gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 23:55 CDT
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I love your story!!!! keep up the good work! ps please update soon
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Title: yeh
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i love this story but....it's been over a month since you've updated please update soon i love this story and i want to know wat happends next soo if you can update soon arigatou gozaimas
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: August 29, 2004 21:34 CDT
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What will happen next? Please update more as soon as possible.
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Title: awesomness
Reviewed By: Rhianon-chan On: August 10, 2004 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah.... T_T Rins growing up! ;_; that sweet little girl has grown up *sobbs* But Corey better wach his back.... he might find a claw in the back of it ^^;;! Anywhoo just keep it up! I so wanna read more..... but again this soooo should be a Rhianon/Seshomaru ficcy..... but thats just personaly opinion ;p Keep It Up!
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Reviewed By: Hoshi-sama On: August 09, 2004 10:54 CDT
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Woot ^_^ nicly done though the mate thing took mye by suprise. Awsomly done ^_^
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Title: KAWAII!!!
Reviewed By: Rhianon-chan On: August 08, 2004 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sighs* ahh..... I am loving it but I perfer a Rhianon/Seshomaru pairing for obvious reasons, But this is soooo kawaii! *imagins holding Inu Jr. in arms, and cooing over the cuteness* *ahem* anywhoo... Im gonna continue on this....
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Title: bummer
Reviewed By: Runishie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 16:01 CDT
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I hope you can get your internet up sooner but then again maybe not so you can update faster. I like how THE LORD sesshomaru has to inpress morgan who is of a lower class about damn time sesshomarue has to prove himself 'worthy,'. He would't get nothing from me not even a loving grin if he had vronered me like that. Oh Yeah I realli enjoy the story update soon.
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Title: CHAPTER 9
Reviewed By: jschu25 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
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Hi, Thanks for the update. There were a few spelling errors but I'm sure you've been busy. I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to the next one when you get to it. I really love the interaction between Sesshoumaru & Morgan. jschu25
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