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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
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I really enjoy your writing. You're in my favorites list. This wasn't a bad chapter; the characters were moved to the new scene and more cast was introduced. However, the spelling was really, really bad.Examples: "Morgan aloud it" == allowed "He seemed bord." == bored "servents" == servants "definitly" == definitely Those are from just the first two paragraphs.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 14, 2004 18:39 CDT
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Beautiful chapter as always. DOn't worry about the gap between chapters, from what you said you are...about as busy as someone can possibly get without falling over from exhaustion. I hope everything goes well, good luck with college. I do look forwards to the next chapter when you have chance but don't hurry on my or anyone else's account. I will still be here and I would hope so will everyone else. My apologies for rambling. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Thornwitch On: October 14, 2004 14:50 CDT
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I like this story, but for christ's sake, use the spellchecker on you computer! That, and there are a lot of innapropriately homonyms in this story. For instance, you keep spelling "hide" as "hyde" its super annoying.
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Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 21:13 CDT
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i review again please i love this story and i would like to know wat will happen...please update soon thank you...ja ne
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Reviewed By: Horse_Gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 23:55 CDT
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I love your story!!!! keep up the good work! ps please update soon
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Title: yeh
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i love this story but....it's been over a month since you've updated please update soon i love this story and i want to know wat happends next soo if you can update soon arigatou gozaimas
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: August 29, 2004 21:34 CDT
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What will happen next? Please update more as soon as possible.
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Title: awesomness
Reviewed By: Rhianon-chan On: August 10, 2004 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah.... T_T Rins growing up! ;_; that sweet little girl has grown up *sobbs* But Corey better wach his back.... he might find a claw in the back of it ^^;;! Anywhoo just keep it up! I so wanna read more..... but again this soooo should be a Rhianon/Seshomaru ficcy..... but thats just personaly opinion ;p Keep It Up!
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Reviewed By: Hoshi-sama On: August 09, 2004 10:54 CDT
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Woot ^_^ nicly done though the mate thing took mye by suprise. Awsomly done ^_^
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Title: KAWAII!!!
Reviewed By: Rhianon-chan On: August 08, 2004 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sighs* ahh..... I am loving it but I perfer a Rhianon/Seshomaru pairing for obvious reasons, But this is soooo kawaii! *imagins holding Inu Jr. in arms, and cooing over the cuteness* *ahem* anywhoo... Im gonna continue on this....
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Title: bummer
Reviewed By: Runishie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 16:01 CDT
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I hope you can get your internet up sooner but then again maybe not so you can update faster. I like how THE LORD sesshomaru has to inpress morgan who is of a lower class about damn time sesshomarue has to prove himself 'worthy,'. He would't get nothing from me not even a loving grin if he had vronered me like that. Oh Yeah I realli enjoy the story update soon.
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Title: CHAPTER 9
Reviewed By: jschu25 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
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Hi, Thanks for the update. There were a few spelling errors but I'm sure you've been busy. I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to the next one when you get to it. I really love the interaction between Sesshoumaru & Morgan. jschu25
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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This was a really good chapter, finally getting Morgan and Sesshoumaru together but the spelling and some of the punctuation was really bad; bad enough I had to read the sentences 2 or 3 times to comprehend them.
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Reviewed By: ~Naoko~ On: July 29, 2004 19:10 CDT
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i really liked this chapter. it made me smile.it was cute and real. its really hard to explain. but really i just really liked it.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 29, 2004 18:05 CDT
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Good luck with the move, hope it goes well. That was another excellent chapter, good to see Sesshomaru finally making his move even if Morgan is reisting somewhat. Look forwards to seeing what happens at the party and how he will prove himself. Till then good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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