| "Worthy" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] |
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 17:14 CDT
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Oh yeah, kudos on having Rin be fertile two weeks before her period. The fan fics where menstruation is equivalent to oestrus just drive me mad (of course it is a short trip).
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I went back to reread Courtship and afterwards gave Worthy a shot. I've read all of the chapters posted here (couldn't see anything wrong with Chapter 2 by the way) and am looking forward to the next.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 03, 2004 18:33 CDT
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Excellent chapter, glad to see you are back. Good luck with the final! With regards to the use of notepad it may be that media miner could not translate some of the characters. Just to ask have you tried using html tags for italics? Hope that might help. once again good luck with the exams, till next tme good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Star-Child On: May 03, 2004 06:04 CDT
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Interesting, very interesting ^_^ Good luck with ur math, I know im gunna have a pain with mine -_-;; Good Luck!
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Reviewed By: Star-Child20 On: May 02, 2004 16:52 CDT
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Aww, I really hope it works on the other sight. I really REALLY like the story.
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Title: sorry
Reviewed By: tiger_gurl On: April 30, 2004 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry about that yeah MM.org has it days as well but they really are trying to fix their mistakes. I'm sure if you send an e-mail they will fix it. I being having problem with finding new NC-17 stories. Like the search is frozen in time. Each time I refresh its still March.12.2004! GRRR I say GRRR which is why I have all my favriote stories/ authors (like yourself) e-mailed to me. (sighs) I got to AFF and find your story.
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Reviewed By: Dhampir [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What happened to the chapter where Rin meets Sesshy? It doesnt show up. Maybe it's my computer...If so, could ya send the chapter to my email at Jade_the_thief@yahoo.com? I'd really appreciate it. THIS STORY IS AWESOME
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Reviewed By: Missy-Bee (not logged on) On: April 20, 2004 01:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AW poor Rin. Got her frist blood flow. HEE HEE poor Sesshy didn't know what to do. LOL so funny.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 19, 2004 18:47 CDT
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Excellent as always! Don't worry about the updates just make them when you can! Hope all goes well! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 08:34 CDT
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Wait! What disturbing news??!?!?!? Is he sick? Did he die? What's going on?? Please don't hurt the little baby! *sniff* You're so mean, picking on a little child. Update REALLY REALLY SOON!! ^____^
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Reviewed By: Star-Child On: April 19, 2004 06:08 CDT
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nice nice ^__^ Please write more! ya did good with the double in one week ^_^ *gives cookie*
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Reviewed By: tiger_gurl On: April 18, 2004 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW Rin got more fire than we all thought. Sesshomaru might find himself caught up in the worst way. LOL. Plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: ~Perra~ On: April 18, 2004 13:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story its funny cute and hot at all the same time its really good its one of my favorite storys keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 17, 2004 22:09 CDT
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Excellent work! Wonder how this is going to work out, you did say she was at the start of her heat cycle after all... Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Star-Child On: April 17, 2004 18:27 CDT
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Nice, keep it comin! ^_____________________^
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