| "Who Do You Think You're Messing With?" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: what exactly do you mean by finished?
Reviewed By: orphanedhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 03:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
because i accept that this story is finished. but technically if you write a sequel, that is a completely different story just in the same timeline. riiiiiiiiiiiiight? right!
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Reviewed By: Sarah aka Vega [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 14:41 CST
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It was just fine without the lemon, it wasn't about that but about the passion that got them there in the first place. Awesome job with this fic!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna (not signed in) On: August 28, 2005 02:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great. It sucked that there was no lemon, but it seemed right without it. I love how Bulma screamed, "Yes, fuck yes!" at the end. Perfect.
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Reviewed By: red dragon On: July 02, 2004 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
totally agree with the opinions expressed by the previous other reviewers, and yes I am a B/V FANFICTION FANATIC...going on 4 years now?? and have read some of the other authors works also, such as lisa b, phantomscribe,ouijis mate,dark angelus,gokus girl,lisa liu (which is where I got my screenname from her fanfiction tetralogy,check ADIMRA's website)and thoroughly enjoy your writing as well...
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Reviewed By: Snazzy On: December 09, 2003 13:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, This fanfic is great, even without the lemon =P It doesn't even need it to be a great story. I agree with all the other reviewers. You are able to write Vegeta's and Bulma's characters very well. Especially Vegeta's. Only in a few fanfics have I read Vegeta in character. Yours is one of them. Congratulations =D
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 14:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! That story(and I don't usually cuss in reviews) was FUCKING AWESOME!!!! You were so indepth with their characters, and there was so much angst and suspense...that was the best writing in a fanfic I've ever seen. I've read a lot of your other stuff, and they're all wonderful, but after this I am your devoted fan for life. Keep it up, please, we need writers like you to inspire everyone else!!
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Reviewed By: Fibs On: November 24, 2003 14:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ember that was awesome. I totally, totally loved it. You described B and V's relationship exactly the way I see it (at least in their early years), ... very passionate. It's sad it has to end, but I guess I like it fine like that. As for the way you described how B feels about her relationship with Yamcha... well, I have to say, it's amazing. I'm going through a *very* similar situation myself, and I can't believe just how well you worded the way she feels about it, and very moved by the way you wrote it. You're only 24 so I guess it's not written from experience, well if you need a proof of your talent, you have it ! Anyway, this was a great fic.
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Reviewed By: Blue Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 07:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I told you before how much I ooved this fic...Ok I'll say it again I love this fic. Even as short as it is its got so much meaning and feelings to it. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Fibounette On: November 21, 2003 18:39 CST
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Well, well ! This is a very, very good start ! You have to be the best BV writer ever ... Can't wait for chapter two ! Fibs
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - not logged in On: November 18, 2003 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Om my God, Ember... I am sitting here crying! Thank you so much for the lovely dedication. It means more than I could ever express to you. You have a gift for writing in Vegeta's POV... a gift that I wish I had! Another awesome story from the best B/V writer on the planet!
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Reviewed By: nona On: November 17, 2003 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo! Another new fic ! This one is awesome so far! I believe you are the best Vegeta psychoanalyst fanfic writer ever ~ I can really picture Veggie obsessing over Bulma (as opposed to stories who depict him as a confused, hopeless romantic). Update update!
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 16:52 CST
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I love the way you get into Vegeta's head like no one else can. Excellent fic!!
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Reviewed By: LisaB (not logged in) On: November 17, 2003 13:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo! I'm the first to get to review! Just wanted to say again this is a great read! Vegeta is sooo deliciously dark in this chapter. Can't soo to much cuz I don't want't to spoil Chap. 2 for folks. And congrats on placing!
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