| "East of the Sun, West of the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Cat Happy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so awsome please wright more I love it and didn't want to stop reading it.
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Title: Fun Idea!
Reviewed By: killsims [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just had to read this, because when I was a kid, I read the storybook East of the Sun, West of the Moon. It is a really cool story you have got going so far, and I look forward to future chapters! I also liked your altered family groupings, very creative. The only thing I think I colud possibly critisize would be your writing style, which is, at times, somewhat akward, with a little grammer that is difficult to understand. Just a suggestion, but it might help to put parts in past tense. But I do not want this to sound like a flame, You have a really awsome fic overall, and it is very fun to read!
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Reviewed By: ChobitsXDarkFreya [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good! Please update the next chapter soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: fireash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 02:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooh i really like this so far. i hope to read more soon. i like rin and sess fics to. i really really like this one. thanks for sharing
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Reviewed By: whitmangurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 09:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Plz Update
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Reviewed By: Geminidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 11:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv his name! Fluffy! *snickers* N e way luv the story, but is Inuyasha gonna be in here? And how old is Kagome? I can't wait for som Sessh/Rin fluff. Fluffy, hehe. G2G GD
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