| "Shattered Mirrors and Memories Past" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 04:03 CST
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*Lets out a long appreciative whistle.* Wow that was impressive. I can't believe i haven't read it nor reviewed it before. It was so beautifully done! I loved how you described things and penned out your characters, it was mostwonderful, although somehow I can't really see Kaiba being the bad evil guy, but that can be over looked! Please keep up the good work, you're writting is fantastic.
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 16:16 CST
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^_^ Very cute and fluffy, the last part anyway. And I'm so glad that Seto got killed, I was about ready to kill him myself. He's such a rich arrogant brat, thinking he can dominate Ryou like that!!
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Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 14:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very entertaning. Great scene and not too graphic, an excelent story.
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Reviewed By: Zoey Hellmaster On: November 21, 2003 07:44 CST
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That was beautiful! Good job!!
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Reviewed By: al On: November 18, 2003 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhhhh!! I would have complained if this was the end so thankfully its not. i never thought that i could be the first visitor.. I really hope you don't lose your interest for writing this and if its gonna have angst, make it torture. ful. Self-torture does take away pain sometimes.
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