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| "Mugenjou" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 09:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And that, my pet, is why I fucking love Akabane. He's psychotic on the same level as Hisoka from HunterxHunter. And neither of them care! Whee! And he oozes smexual overtures at Ginji. I love how you've just... captured him! Completely and utterly! This just had me squirming and thinking 'omg! Akabane-san is too smex-god for words'. It makes me wanna write Akabane/Ginji slash... *drool* Your first person is wonderful for Akabane! Just wonderful! I was delighted! Such a good little ficlett! The -only- thing I think would improve it even more is getting rid of the fangirl Japanese. I know it feels cool to write in and puts us inside the memory of watching the anime- but if people have seen the anime or read the manga, they'll know what your talking about when you write in english. The really good stories- the ones that everyone's heard of... aren't written in fangirl Japanese. Otherwise, I was completely enthralled. You have Akabane down to a 'ne' or T as the term may be. I will look forward to more Akabane slash (heh) from you in the future. This fic is going on my favorites.
| Title: very good
Reviewed By: saiyaku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 15:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow, you had write Akabane-san's thoughts so good…I really love your fanfic. Maybe you will write more Akabane and Ginji FFs, onegai shimasu? *goes to the knees* Please write more!!!!
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