| "White Desires" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Spawn of Hell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 15:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
so fucking hot! nice fic... really nice fic... did i mention hot?
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Reviewed By: Miko No Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 21:41 CST
Comment/Review:
So good! Why does this have only one other review? Its fantastic! Especially the last chapter, such a heated scene and well written too. I adore the line "I want to feel you" its so...so...Yohji, and sweet too. A great ending. Her Supreme Omni-potence, Miko No Hoshi
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Reviewed By: V On: November 28, 2003 18:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the psychological aspect of your writing and your style. A bad guy with his talent is frightening and the connection to ... This opens up such fun (probably not the right word) possibilities. This was very cleverly constructed and enjoyable. I'm afraid I'm not clever enough with words to say what I wish to say.
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