| "Maybe If, Another Time" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Jenifael On: September 13, 2005 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it a lot , your story is interesting and i think you should continue the story.
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Reviewed By: gothmonkeys17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 21:10 CDT
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I think you should continue. This story is awesome ^_^ *thumbs up*
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Reviewed By: tiger_gurl On: April 11, 2004 00:12 CDT
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well that sucks. ALl well. I thought it was a okay story but to each her own.
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Reviewed By: gothic vampire On: December 21, 2003 17:59 CST
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i think you should continue the story. its really good. i want to see how it all wors out. so please continue!!
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Title: i want to know what happens nexts
Reviewed By: wildgirl4560 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it a lot its very good but i hope inuyasha softens up some
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Title: keep goin'
Reviewed By: stesnus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think your story is great you SHOULD keep on goin' just for the hell of it you never no it might turn out to be a better story then you thought it would be
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Reviewed By: Um On: November 26, 2003 02:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's not bad. You shouldn't give up on it. Many great stories have slightly bumpy beginings. Why not try writing it with a pencil and paper before typing it up?
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Reviewed By: inu's girl On: November 25, 2003 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of my favorite stories.i think that you should continue
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Reviewed By: RekkaShinen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I just discovered it on MM.org because my comp's been a real bitch... Please continue!!! *looks sad* If you don't... I'll cry...
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Reviewed By: squishy On: November 25, 2003 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great! i like this alot!!!! please please please continue this piece!!!1
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Reviewed By: SayaoranInuyasha11 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i think u should try and continue the stroy nee? so far ur chapters are good... well as long as not too bad stuff happens... anyweis... continue..
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Reviewed By: alexy On: November 21, 2003 23:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it alot keep writing
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Reviewed By: WinterWolf7 On: November 20, 2003 22:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
To short, hope some sex soon
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Reviewed By: PJ On: November 20, 2003 02:41 CST
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Interesting kind of a new twist to how they met. Post more soon I want to see what happens next.
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