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| "Point of Origin" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: why can,t mai haf/geine
Reviewed By: dr fan/mai-lover On: August 31, 2005 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bervobervobervberovobervoberov but i'd why can,t mai=be-haif-geine-cater-to-saotoyleine-of-croosover
| Title: Great!
Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woha! This is a deep, wonderfully creative story. I like how you write--you give the exact postition and time of the place. The are little to no spelling errors, and your grammar is impeccable. This isn't like any of the other stories--where Malik, Ryou, and Yugi/Atemu recive a letter and go off to hogwarts. The chapters are long, which is a godsend because most of the YGOHP fics are by inexpirenced authors, who usually write little and post it. I', hope that soon you'll update again. The relationships aren't pushed, which is a good thing, so it seems more realistic. I'll be watching for more updates, and keep up the great work!
| Title: er....
Reviewed By: suboinsakura On: June 01, 2004 06:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
no we din read tis fic but i tried 2 go on b cant how do u do it!? u have an item or smth!?realy....now i hav 2 acc b i cant go 2 any o tem!!!!!WWWAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!\sakura:*wacks her on t head*sry bout her...i read t 1st chappie n it wasnt tat good try 2 do betta ok /suboi:X.X \sakura:bb
| Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: December 06, 2003 00:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Yes Isis and her family did pay a heavy price which was her brother and his Yami(see Battle City). Not only the Pharaoh will know but many powerful people who can sense shadow magic or anything relating to the Shadow Realm will know already Barakua and Malik will figure out what is happening,Yugi's presence in Europe and I'm willing to bet even Seto can sense the shadow magic that You Know Who used since he used to be a high priest in Ancient Eygpt and worse for You Know Who,they know each other and know the Shadow magic and played the Shadow Games many times.
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