| "Is It Real?" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: Good start....
Reviewed By: Hyper Shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 00:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn. You really grabbed my attention at the beginning. When I first started reading it, I began to think you would screw up on Faye's personality but you didn't! Hell! You were dead on. My only problem (And it was a major one. Sorry!) is that you made things too short. Everything felt so rushed and forced. I wanted to know more about how everyone reacted to the situations of Spike's death. Who is Jet's wife? How did they meet? How did they all find Ed and Ein? Good chatpter, though. Has serious potential.
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Reviewed By: sadaboxter83 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 00:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
update update update update update
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Reviewed By: leatomomka85 On: August 03, 2004 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is really good. i enjoyed it. But there is one problem about faye, in the series, she isn't a virgin. You kinda have that totally wrong. oh well though. IS there going to be another chapter? if so, i can't wait for it. keep up the good work. I hope Spike and Faye get together. Peace out!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Fire and Water On: May 17, 2004 12:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really don't think Faye would be a virgin... o.O
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Title: Mesa wantsa to seesa moresa
Reviewed By: WhyteWulffe On: April 25, 2004 02:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
good beginning but would like to read more
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: Kageko On: April 24, 2004 03:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope it'll be fun! please continue! keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: coarse dareei ~ On: March 20, 2004 23:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's it? No! You must write longer chapters! I like it so far! Your writing is a bit simple, but I think it's only because I think the length is too short. But besides that, I like!! Please continue soon!!
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Reviewed By: Hyper Shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it could have been more detailed. The events also seemed kinda rushed. I am interested in what happens next, however! Please write a new chapter a.s.a.p!
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Reviewed By: trainer01 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue to write more! Can't wait!
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Title: YOU MUST UPDATE
Reviewed By: Julitica [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOON, oh yea and CONTINUE
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Reviewed By: Queen_of_Blades [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 03:12 CST
Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!! Keep writing please! Update soon!! I absolutly love Cowboy Bebop, especially Spike Faye parings!! Keep going!! Update soon !!
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Title: nice start
Reviewed By: reene On: December 28, 2003 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the way this is moving. You so have to continue.
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Reviewed By: alfh On: December 26, 2003 01:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It real good! It leaves me wanting to know the rest.
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Reviewed By: Descendant [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 23:07 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a tease! Please do some more... I have to know who it is! Although I suspect, I cannot tell for sure. So far so good!
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 16:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's good so far please update soon
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