| "Deception" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 22:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, it wasn't a bad chapter, you're too hard on yourself. I just wish the chapter had been longer! Lol. I can't wait for your next update...please hurry!
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Reviewed By: MistressChaos (not logged in) On: December 28, 2003 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so far. It's kinda sad that Bulma and the carrot-head are on bad terms. Do you hate Chichi? It seems like it. Please update soon. I can't wait to see who is going to win the fight. I don't know who I want to win it. Either will be great. Well, hope to see the next chapter soon. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: MistressChaos [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. It's really good. I loved Geta's dream and the reality. Heehee. Please update it soon. I want to know where Bulma is taking Geta! Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Blankedy Blank On: November 27, 2003 15:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a good story but there is one problem. How can Vegeta have known bulma for 16 years when she is only 14 and he 15. That doesnt really make a whole lotta sense if u know what i mean. Other than that its a pretty good story so far. Keep up the good writing and update soon.
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Reviewed By: Blankedy Blank On: November 27, 2003 15:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a good story but there is one problem. How can Vegeta have known bulma for 16 years when she is only 14 and he 15. That doesnt really make a whole lotta sense if u know what i mean. Other than that its a pretty good story so far. Keep up the good writing and update soon.
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. Kind of short, though. Well, hurry with the next one.
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Reviewed By: Eqlipse_Moon (Not signed on) On: November 22, 2003 14:08 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! That was so cold to end there like that!!! I was all into the story too! Update soon! I loved it!!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 12:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! I absolutely love your story so far; great start. Please hurry, that was an evil cliffy!
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Reviewed By: Jiggle [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 12:10 CST
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Aww no way! I can't wait for more! This is a terrific start! I got a feeling its gonna be interesting...anyway, keep it up :)
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