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Title: Very beautiful
Reviewed By: marlene_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2011 10:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And very well writen i have always thought that vegeta pays bulma with sex XD bulma knows he is a sex machine ready to reload :D PD: Your vegeta is very simillar to the tv show. i like that! i don´t love a soft or a pure horny vegeta, at last at the beginning. he was not like that! |
Reviewed By: Grescia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2008 22:13 EDT
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nice
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Reviewed By: CascadingPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 14:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the introduction to the fic actually, because I couldn't agree with you more. Dragon Ball Z isn't something I got into recently, I've been watching and reading it from a very young age. (And if you know anything about Northern Ireland, you'll know manga is not easy to come by.) But it is only recently I've got into the fanfiction side; and immediately I was astounded by the level of unoriginality and lack of character preservation. However, you managed to capture the sides of Vegeta and Bulma that we don't see; making it completely plausable and in keeping with what we do know. I'm so glad someone thought this through properly and gave me an interesting, original and thus enjoyable read. The only qualm I had (It's more of an opinion of my own personal tastes than any fault on your part)was that [very]occasionally there are too many adjectives to describe a particular aspect of scenery/environment. But otherwise I find the simplicity and feeling in this piece very involving. Thank you for a thoroughly enjoyable read. Emma
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Title: cute :)
Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 17:11 EST
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love the ending. :)
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Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 06:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I only have one word for you....AWESOME! You stayed in character with both and I loved it!
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Reviewed By: Female_typhoon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 15:49 EST
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its me again ^_^ just congratulating you on another fantastic story. i love the idea for this one. the 'three year' plot is so overdone. and i absoluty love the one line "I'm a warrior not a variety of flower!" hahaha! brilliant joke! i wonder how many people actually get that one ^_^
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Title: rings true!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 12:05 EDT
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trying to meet my goal of going back and leaving reviews for all fics I especially enjoyed! I'm totally with you here on V&B not even beginning to learn to love until after Cell Saga. Nice, settled feeling in my gut when a fic matches my vision of those two lovebirds. And now that I know you're not a B/V otaku, I'm even more impressed with this one. (more reviews later!)debbiechan
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Reviewed By: venus legacy On: April 06, 2004 14:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was absolutely totally fantastic you really showed me a different perspective about the development of bulma and vegetas relationship i can actually see this happening it really is believable for i have often pondered how vegeta could have loved bulma when he let her airmobile crash down to the ground after Dr gero shot it down. I know others say that he didn't want to show his true feelings infront of everyone but then you said if he really loved her he would have saved her regardless not put his trust in someone else to do it. I don't know but then again he is a master of his emotions... aaaaahh i don't know i think he just put destroying the androids as his main priority at the time and because Dr gero was escaping he didn't want to let him go.....so he let the woman he loved and his only child plummet to the ground .... ahhhhh its still confusing i salute you for writing this story and admire your interpretation and the amount of depth you go into whilst keeping the characterisation accurate i can't wait to read your story where vegeta is an angel who has lost faith in humans.
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Reviewed By: bimbo n ditz On: February 23, 2004 07:40 EST
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this woz gud well done!!!! surfs up!
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Title: Learning To Love
Reviewed By: Anita Dic On: December 02, 2003 04:19 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was really blown away by the writing style. It was excellent and I loved the way you did the steps. Super job AM!! Sue
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 14:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, wow. That was so great that I'm actually crying right now. Thank you for writing such a wonderful piece. It gave me a lot of inspiration.
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Reviewed By: Blue Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 10:58 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great one...especially since you hate Vegeta so much! I like your writing style. I'll be sure to read the rest of your stories. lol BS
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Title: Bardockgurl(MM STILL Hates me)
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 08:20 EST
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Yes, yes - I forgot to review the other day... so shoot me!! :(( I absolutely adore the way you've set this out, but I was disappointed that Vegeta didn't bring her flowers and boxes of chocolates every night, and declared his undying adoration of her in front of the whole Z gang...:( Ahh well, can't have it all, I suppose...
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Reviewed By: Jiggle [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 12:08 EST
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I meant such! Well great fic! Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Jiggle [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 12:07 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, i thoroughly enjoyed that. Thank you for suh a great fic!
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