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Reviewed By: Aki T On: February 03, 2004 15:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wheee! I'm normally a fanfiction.net person, but I decided to look around here for a while. I loved this fic! It was so well-written! The wording was good, you don't get many lemons like that. I liked the situation of it; the whole gangster thing. This was awesome! Great job! --Aki
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Title: Wahoo!!!!
Reviewed By: Can't tell you yet.... :) On: January 30, 2004 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please stop censoring, it really defeats the purpose of a lemon, and don't be afraid and concerned of who your audience is, be it 9 or 19 yrs old But, good fic, great structure and excellent base! Keep going!
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Reviewed By: inu_obsessed_chic27 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 15:17 CST
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I like ur lemon, it da bomb one of da best I've eva read!!!
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Reviewed By: Hello! ^^ On: January 30, 2004 13:27 CST
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Font Color Good Stuff, good stuff! ^^ Font Color
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Reviewed By: Lady Kaela [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this one-shot. This is the only one-shot this I actually like.
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Reviewed By: Orb On: January 10, 2004 17:32 CST
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An NC-17 with actual lemon. YOu don't find that much now-a-time. Good stuff, it seemed weird at hte beginning...Like a steel-mill, or construction site but the rest more you read the better it gets. I lok forward to reading more stuff from you.
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Title: add on
Reviewed By: Akaneko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 16:07 CST
Comment/Review:
but ur lemons are good ^_^
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Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2003 17:42 CST
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Nope. The word 'fuck' was cut off once again...
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Reviewed By: jemStar On: December 27, 2003 15:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the story keep it up.My fav part was the lemon.Keep up the good work.
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Title: Good one!
Reviewed By: Vellakitty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2003 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey you need to make this story go on, please?! This was a good first chapy! Good luck if you need it, but if you keep this up I don't think you will need it!
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Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 15:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Sweet! Love the story *bows to you* Oh great writer of lemons! Maybe you should make this longer =D Wheee!
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 13:02 CST
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can u write another chapter? i loved the lemon its the best ive read! can u write another lemon?
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 22:16 CST
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i like it!
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Title: Yow-sa!!
Reviewed By: Lady Pantera On: December 08, 2003 12:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're just good. Way to good! I wonder... have you thought about writig a full blown fic from this story? I think it would be fantastic!!
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Reviewed By: Shinigamis Demise On: December 06, 2003 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They share a room? That confused me, but other than that it was great. Nothing better than a decent lemon-one-shot. If you wanted to, you could probably prolong it and add more chapters. But it isnt necessary, its great without it, although some of the words were cut off.
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