| "I'm the Boss" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 13:02 CST
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can u write another chapter? i loved the lemon its the best ive read! can u write another lemon?
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 22:16 CST
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i like it!
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Title: Yow-sa!!
Reviewed By: Lady Pantera On: December 08, 2003 12:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're just good. Way to good! I wonder... have you thought about writig a full blown fic from this story? I think it would be fantastic!!
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Reviewed By: Shinigamis Demise On: December 06, 2003 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They share a room? That confused me, but other than that it was great. Nothing better than a decent lemon-one-shot. If you wanted to, you could probably prolong it and add more chapters. But it isnt necessary, its great without it, although some of the words were cut off.
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Reviewed By: Mitsue-chan On: December 06, 2003 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, very original, you should write a sequel.
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Reviewed By: Three-Legged Dog On: December 06, 2003 08:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was intresting. Unfortunatly MM.org didnt put in all the words. It kept on writing "ing" instead of "f***ing".
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 05:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bd not bad but could have gone in more detail
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Reviewed By: Gothic Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved that, especially the lemon. The whole punishment and saftey part reminds me of J.D. Robbs Eve and Roarke books, lol. Anyways, I loved it, write more if you can!!
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Reviewed By: Relix On: November 24, 2003 05:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grammar errors... besides that, Good work.
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Reviewed By: Cadey [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 09:11 CST
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Oh. Wow. That was such a good fic, I can't even bring myself to describe it. I loved the idea of Inuyasha 'punishing' Kagome, and I love how they weren't all goody-two-shoes in this. The handcuffs were a nice touch, as was the sex on a table. Overall, a great fic!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: November 21, 2003 19:15 CST
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Good lemon!
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Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 15:04 CST
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WOW! Love the Lemon! So "punish" Inuyasha! Please! You could easily make this into a longer story! *Wink Wink* Adios!
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Reviewed By: Katina108 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 14:14 CST
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it's good, and makes me want to know more about what they are doing..
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha's Girl On: November 21, 2003 13:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it! this could certainly be part of a longer fic if you chose to make it one.
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 06:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
do you have a longer fic like this on ff.net, I've been teased like that before...it pissed me off something feirce
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