| "Kaiba Fried Corp" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW you write the best Seto/Joey fics I've ever read! This one and Roof Romp are my favorites... that was hilarious when they got walked in on at the end :P anways keep up the great writing!!!
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Reviewed By: seto lover On: July 07, 2004 08:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That fic was the best 1 i've read so far. i mean really, i'm writting my own fan fic but it's nothing compared to this. i really loved it^.~ PLEEEAAASSSE write MORE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: TabiWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you sure this is the end? TabiWolf
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Reviewed By: jenna On: January 01, 2004 05:30 CST
Comment/Review:
^-^ good keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Bhakti [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2003 03:35 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like how you developped kaiba! He was a jerk, but with a longing ^_^. Joey was awsome too. ^_^" I'm pretty sure his dad is more of a jerk than that, considering in the manga he never brings anyone there because of the condition it's in. Anyways, it's an aswsome story ^_^
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Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 19:16 CST
Comment/Review:
That's pretty cool! I like it a lot! Next time don't use as many cliches though
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Reviewed By: Golgoth On: December 21, 2003 05:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I could I would give it 11. Immene fic. 10 all round!!!
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Title: OMG^^
Reviewed By: Cruel_angel On: December 19, 2003 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa, what a story! u hv some serious talent. keep up the good work ^^
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Reviewed By: al On: December 12, 2003 02:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good. I felt as happy for them as if they were my favorite charcters.
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Title: Awwww!!!!
Reviewed By: Sweets On: December 09, 2003 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again I am oozethed. It's amazing how you manage the roll reversal so well. I mean, normally I wouldn't read it, but you just have a way with smut. Smut, my dear, is to you as water is to wet.
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Reviewed By: Momma loves her baby... kitten people! On: December 09, 2003 23:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh yeah. Tease that bastard Joey! Man the end was so fuuny, and sweet too. Thumbs up!
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Reviewed By: Momma... who cares? On: November 25, 2003 08:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hmmm... seems kinda NC. He got into it, but not totally so. Seto is kinda using him like a hoe and stuff. Thats not bad, it will be interesting to see how it works out. Don't tell me this is another 'incest' rape thing is it?
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Reviewed By: al On: November 22, 2003 13:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
what sweets said. except for the watching you part. no one like being stalked.
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Title: *fuzzy grin*
Reviewed By: Sweets [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 03:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know if I noticed the impact of a Beta or not, all I know is I get the honour of reviewing first and reading this precious piece of writing. I WANT MOOOORRREEE!!! You have a wonderful style of writing, always so funny, always the sex scenes are soooo sweet and hot and heavy. You seem to really like Seto/Jounouchi couplings and you portray the pair very well. I simply enjoyed this to NO end! I hope you write more! MUCH more!!! I'll be watching you... you and yer sexy little stories too...
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