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| "Forgive and Forget Part I" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Author On: May 02, 2004 18:08 CDT
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Ok, you didn't leave a e-mail addy, so I can only try to tell you thru this way. I added another chapter, but it goes on to tell the story of Sango and Miroku, so i seperated it. It's under,"Forgive and Forget II" ok? k *hugs* you wil soon know all... heheh... well SOME, but I gotta keep you guys hanging, otherwise you won't read!
| Reviewed By: inuyashatotallyobsessed On: May 02, 2004 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was realy good.is naraku realy dead? why is Inu laughfing? what is Kags thoughts when she has to explaine what happened? you should ad Kouga in to. is kana dead or fainted. if dead will Sess revive her? what about Kohaku? Shippo needs another suger high! i think Sess should revive Naraku just so Inu can kick the shit out of him. you serously cant stop there. PLESE WRITE MORE!! i need to know what happens next. JaNe
| Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon On: November 29, 2003 23:27 CST
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Awww, you can't just leave me hanging like this! It's a good story so far, and I'd really love to know what will happen now. It's written fairly well, although I think it could use a little bit more in the way of details. ^_^ But anyway, please continue to work on it!
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