| "The Children" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 20:34 CST
Comment/Review:
I likw dis, I hope u update it soon... Please? - Chaos Damn It
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Reviewed By: Sutsurike Deafu On: December 12, 2003 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, so far you have... somewhat a base for your story. Try to write longer chapters and think about your story (unless you are purposely keeping that to yourself for now) because there isn't much story in here yet. If you want a prereader I'd be glad to offer my services. Just e-mail me at: wxtomas15@hotmail.com ~Sutsurike Deafu
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