| "I have something to say" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Almighty Neko-chan On: January 06, 2004 19:41 CST
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Just to let you know, the thing you called a "breather" in chapter four is actually called a "respirator". Yeah..... that's it for now, I guess.
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Title: ....
Reviewed By: the rurouni [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2003 15:02 CST
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okay okay FINE i know my spelling is not the best in the world nor the worst but still... if you are kind enough plz lay off my spelling mistakes so i can write my stories with a clear mind.
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Reviewed By: Almighty Neko-chan On: December 18, 2003 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ummm... the storyline is okay... Sorry to say, but your spelling and grammar is very poor. Have you never heard of proofreading? You have several grammar mistakes and countless spelling errors. Not to mention missed punctuation. Also, you should make your chapters a little longer. They are only a paragraph or so, and don't really keep the reader's attention (unless they are mind-numbingly stupid). Though, if you decide to keep the short chapters, then you should at least update more often. That's all I have to say, for now. Ja ne. ~Almighty Neko-chan~
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Reviewed By: Lynxiegurl On: December 03, 2003 16:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
As great as this fic is... have you EVER heard of full stops, commas or any type of punctuation before?! I love it but please proofread it! Also you need to capitalize some of your letters like 'domino' and such. Keep it going but it needs to be thoroughly proofread before you post up your chapters!
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Title: ???????
Reviewed By: dragon of amon ra On: December 03, 2003 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
intersting story ......
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: the rurouni [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 20:03 CST
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WOW I FINALLY GOT ALOT OF REVIEWS....(tears) keep reviewing
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Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 02:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You'd better keep this going!!! *threatens with a knife to your throat* Sorry... I just love it! It's the first Kaiba/Isis fic I have ever read! I love it!
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Title: yeah
Reviewed By: swords On: November 27, 2003 08:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude awesome fanfic.
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Reviewed By: Will, aka BLACK FURY On: November 24, 2003 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, rare...a Seto/Isis. YAY! no S/N, S/J, or S/Y (disgusting) Finally, a S/I fic Whoopee (does little happy dance, hugs chibi-Blue-Eyes)...ahem. Anyhoo. Really cool that there's at least one S/I fic on MM. one problem: Chapters are too short! Aw well. It's good anyway. PS: I agree w/ Natsu. I don't think Kaiba'd just blurt that kinda thing out. Congratulations.
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Reviewed By: Rishai_Bakura [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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This is a great one
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Reviewed By: natsu On: November 23, 2003 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay... seto/isis. update soon, kaiba doesn't seem like the type of person to say "i love you" outright does he?
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