| "Braided Wanderer" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Thanks
Reviewed By: Skylar14 (Author) [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 19:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Why thank you. I don't often get very many reviews. I really appreciate it!
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Reviewed By: turtle_fire On: July 10, 2004 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this sweet poem, it deserves A+++++++ rating. Nice choice of words, you'd totally captured Shinigami's spirit.
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Reviewed By: Pia Bartolini [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
You got a good grade on THAT?! No offense or anything, but a poet you most certainly are NOT! The Content isn't too horrible, though unoriginal, to saythe least. but stylistically it's juvenile, at best. The meter is uneven, the syllabic composition is dismal, and overall, it is just rather unappealing. What you were trying to say wasn't bad - the way you said it absolutely was. You've done yourself a true disservice here. Please note this isn't a mean flame, or not intended to be...but it is my honest opinion as a reader. A revision on this piece could do wonders. If you would like some actual constructive criticism, or more feedback, please email me at kurea_13@hotmail.com. You have promise as an author, but definitely need some work on the technical side of things.
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Reviewed By: otako On: February 13, 2004 17:42 CST
Comment/Review:
nice
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Reviewed By: ao On: February 11, 2004 16:35 CST
Comment/Review:
that was good!!!
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Reviewed By: KuraiMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 08:52 CST
Comment/Review:
^^ i loved it!
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Title: Deep
Reviewed By: Clara(Ronin) On: January 07, 2004 09:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great, but the only problem was that i never watched Gundum so i don't really know who this guy is. Very deep, love it and i hope that Sky makes some more!
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Title: Wowza!
Reviewed By: AngelWingAsh [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!!! Well done!
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