| "The Heart an History of the Pharaoh" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: awsomw story
Reviewed By: rico a.k.a: el rico On: June 30, 2005 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is great u need to keep on with it i have read it at least 10 times by now and it gets bettter and better with every time i read it. u really need to start it up again i have told everyone i know that likes yu-gi-oh and they have read it too and they love it. keep writing and fill me in on the updates. u can email me at ariesguy1289@yahoo.com but put in a subject so i know it will be u. thanks again for the story it is really good.
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Reviewed By: kirby_04 (not logged in) On: August 23, 2004 15:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
This actually -very- good! You must continue, or...I'll send you to the Shadow Realm!!! J/k...bad one at that... Anyway! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: nikkibluebellmakana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story.keep updating.I also understand that all writers need rest.If you ask your reviewers whether they want longer chapters and less updates or short chapters and more updates it helps.Keep at the good work.luv your story.=D ja ne, nikkibluebellmakana
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: PhoenixOfShadows [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 08:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tera:*from inside of a closet* THIS STORY IS REALLY GOOD!!!! KEEP WRITING!! Yami: ~.~U why are you in a closet??? Tera: Seto threw me in here and sealed the door shut cause I found his private bathroom that was REALLY girly......~_~U Yami: O.OUUUUUUUUUU ok?
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Reviewed By: shadow_kazul [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 16:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
you should write more
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Reviewed By: Tamra of Egypt On: April 30, 2004 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, but do u think u could speed up the updating.. i hate cliffhangers!!! thanx
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Reviewed By: Ahmos On: March 02, 2004 14:19 CST
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That was a great fanfic you should post more.Hope you post them soon.
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Reviewed By: mistress_of_ra [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 19:43 CST
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Hey remember me from ff.net? So you decided to post it here to huh? I read your notice on the author's note and u deserve a good rest! Btw, I have 2 stories here. Ja Ne, MOR
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