| "Together" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Rethalia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 05:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww that was adorable. I loved it. Not only that, but you kept them both in character, even at the end; because you had a good transition from Heero from stoic and emotionless to sharing something of his past etc etc. It wasn't just boom all of a sudden Heero's a teary emotional mess kind of thing. In short, that was really freakin good. ^^;
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 26, 2003 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was really sweet. I love happy endings. Keep up the good job.
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 00:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Oooo fluffy! I loved Hilde's 'hello', that was hilarious. Hmm that almost made me forget by headcold. Snirf. And Relena got covered with cake and punch, what could be better...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 25, 2003 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story I really liked it is that it or will there be more ? I hope theres more ..But if not I really enjoyed it ..TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 10:47 CST
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Hehehe, I can't wait to see what else you have planned for Relena! The gloves are off indeed! I hope we get a fluffy ending out of all this.
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Reviewed By: Turtle Fire On: November 25, 2003 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Duo, I hate to make him wait even for one day! If I were Heero, I would just say, " I am fucking gay, get lost!" Please get rid of Relena ASAP! I can't stand her! A Duo&Heero lemon to burn Relena's eyes would be nice too!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 24, 2003 17:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heero swearing! That's a first. I like the tactics that he is using. Different yet original. Keep up the good job and update soon cuz I love fluff when Duo and Heero are concerned.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 24, 2003 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great and I want to here more so please update soon..TTFN
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 13:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't tell me that this wass supposed to be a one shot. I had tooooooo much fun with the crude Heero. More Relena bashing, please. oh, pretty pretty please.
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