Title: serene_fiary@hotmail.com Reviewed By: pyro coneko On: November 26, 2003 00:08 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Its good I'll admit that it got my intrist but perhaps you can make it supernatural like having yugi and yami and yugi's grandfather come back to live it would be odd and nice.Imust say though I love how your fics come out so good I really enjoy these storys of u'rs Im looking forward to the next chapter of I think its high scool play anyways my next revierw will not be soon have and uncle coming over EVIL uncle per haps you can havr Zach and honda die or make zach a good guy peace for now please email me ^ . ^
