| "The Last Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Angel of forgotten souls [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 13:31 CST
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oh, wow. This is really good! I loved it! Please continue! This is one of my favorite stories here on MM.org!
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Reviewed By: Koritsune Dragonrider [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 21:57 CST
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PLease hurry and write!! Me wanna read more!!
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Reviewed By: Kage_Noroino [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 09:30 CST
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Well, fist of all, if you like my story and review, YAY!!!!!! and also, the questionn about Yukina and Kurama, this takes place right after Yusuke beat the Saint Beasts, and they have never met Yukina before. Just to answer your question! Thanks for reviewing my story! Bye Bye!
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Reviewed By: BabbleQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 14:57 CST
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*looks around* wonder when you ever is gonna update this one...I for one like it...even if the chapters is a wee bit short....liked Kuramas new outfit however ;p It for some reson very easy to picture him in that....one question however.... How come Yukina is there too, and they act like they don't know eatch other? What are the ages? Anyway...I like this one. :) Even if it's not many who reviews, this one for sure is good...upps...not so good grammar there(oh well). :D Happy Holidays!
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 22:11 CST
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Interesting but..Would not Hiei be more upset with Kurama gone missing? He just vanished right in front of him. Hiei would be pissed!! And the whole bet thing was a little off i thought would not Kurama vote for Yusuke other than against him? Just a couple thoughts. Other than that you did a great job with everything else. I loved the whole king idea!! sounds cool! bye
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Reviewed By: BabbleQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one is pretty good! Even if the text is pretty big in the second chapter everything else is really good. I can't wait until next chapter. *thumbs up* Hopefully you'll update this one pretty quick :)
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