| "The Torment" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: he's a real saiyan!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 16:31 CDT
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Oh yes, I see this side of Goku! Original & thoughtful fic--glad I read it. I've been musing about the ending of DBZ and this fic seems to explain Goku's motivation for training Uub really well. debbiechan
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 13:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the dark side of Saiyans. I also liked the way you used it to explain the inconsistencies in Goku's character. Please continue this.
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 13:59 CST
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Wow! THis was brilliant. It makes perfect sense. I laughed so hard at the thought of Kakarot "dealing" with ChiChi. ^_^ Great job.
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Reviewed By: Phantomscribe72 - Carla to you On: November 26, 2003 05:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, you have made a dies in the wool Goku hater stop and think. This is an incredible fic. Well thought out and wonderfully written. It is VERY original, but at the same time very plausible. Thank you for sharing your gift with us!
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Reviewed By: lunarsensitive On: November 26, 2003 00:59 CST
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Interesting interpretation of Goku's character. I was hoping it had a little yaoi thrown in, but we can't have everything, can we? Would you care to continue this? I'll be most willing to read it if you do.
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Title: The Torment
Reviewed By: Anita Dick On: November 25, 2003 09:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent piece of work!! You have the ability to grab the reader by the short hairs with your incredible writing style. Poor, sweet lovable Goku...who knew that deep down inside he has an inner demon just dying to come out. BRAVO AM!! Oh yeah, this'll be the name I review under since MM has decided not to let me use my own. -_- Sue/Susan
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Title: Me likey!!
Reviewed By: Blue Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 08:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic! beautifuly worded, short but meaningful...Keep up the great work. BS
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Title: Bardockgurl(MM Hates me)
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 07:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shows how much MM hates me... It cut off my review!! :(( I was being all praising too... :( I complimented you on the wonderful introspection you put down, and sobbing for Poor Darling Goku..:( Lamenting on not only did he literally have the weight of the world on his shoulders, but had to fight the demon within on top of that!! :((:(( Then I ended up being jealous of your gift for writing and story telling, and flouncing off in a huff... Oh, I also apologised in advance for making you re-post when I re-read the fic, and saw all the errors I missed when I beta'ed... :D
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl(MM Hates me) [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 07:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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